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Mar 12, 2007 03:49

Title: He doesn't want it.
Author: Becky_H
Pairing: Ninth Doctor/Jack, Tenth Doctor/Jack
Rating: PG
Word Count: 500
Warnings: Very mild D/s themes if you squint.
Spoilers Parting of Ways for Doctor Who S1, All of Torchwood S1.
Summary: Five Drabbles that follow Jack from Station Five to End of Days.
Author's Notes: Written for Tw_Flashfic's power challenge.

( All he's chasing is the truth and all he wants are answers. )

power

Comments 13

miss_andromache March 12 2007, 10:25:37 UTC

Nicely done! Very nice and angsty, and completely believable. I especially like your explanation of how (and why) Jack got to Cardiff.

becky_writing March 12 2007, 10:29:20 UTC

Thank you! I had a really good time playing with getting Jack off the station. I'm glad it worked for you.

adafrog March 12 2007, 11:56:40 UTC

Very nice. Love the mentioning that he's tired.

and he wants is his Doctor.
You missed an all, or added an is. ;)

becky_writing March 12 2007, 11:57:51 UTC

Thank you for catching that!

*runs to fix*

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becky_writing March 12 2007, 16:57:31 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

unfeathered March 12 2007, 16:53:36 UTC

So sad - poor old Jack! Glad he gets his happy ending :-)

becky_writing March 12 2007, 16:58:38 UTC

I am ALL over pain, but I like my endings hopeful darn it.

Thank you!

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becky_writing March 12 2007, 19:57:26 UTC

Thank you! It was fun.