Fic: Banana Muffins and Other Homey Smells a TenJack fic

[javana12]

I bring fic! Well a ficlet. But hey I actually wrote something! (although honestly I should probably be doing my optoelectronics report... as you can all guess this is so much more interesting

Comments

[obeythepenguin]

Banana muffins - they sound oddly nice. I like pork and banana, sort of odd though.

Lol, you've got banana's on my mind now. Great fic, cute. I love a jealous Doc!

Glad to see I'm not the only new writer to DW world, but damn, you beat me with this story ^_^

[javana12]

lol! I thought your story was better!

But yeah, it is rather nerve-racking putting up stuff when I'm so new to the fandom, particulary since there's so many brilliant writers out there.

Anyway thanks so much for the review. I'll have a banana in celebration (not sure about the banana and pork yet but I'll give it a go...)

Thanks again.
*hugs*

[javana12]

Thanks for the con-crit. It's helped a lot - after all i can't get better any other way. I'll try and distinguish any flashbacks better next time.

Glad you liked the Jack in apron image.

Thanks again for the review. It meant the world to me.

*hugs*

[vail_kagami]

Oh, this was really sweet. There are a few things that bothered me (I can't see the Doctor calling Jack, or anyone, a whore, and desribing actions in ** works in chatrooms but not in stories. Also, that guy's name was Rassilon and not Rassolin, but I'm suspecting that one of being a typo.) but it was lovely overall. I hope we see more from you in the future!

[javana12]

Thanks for the review.

Yeah, I know normally the Doctor wouldn't be so crass but I was trying to show how hurtful he can be - even unintentionally, when he's jealous. But thank for the note, I'll make sure to remember it next time. And didn't know about the ** thing but your right it probably does work better in chat. Oh well. I've learnt something new.

Glad you liked it. And yes it was a typo - going to correct now. *sheepish smile*

Thanks again for the review.
*hugs*

[wickednotevil]

Aww, that was so cute. Baking!Jack. And the bananas (I always liked it when 9 went on about them).
Jack-The-Fact and 'skinny Time Lord in trainers' have got to become canon nicknames.
Liked it! Check the spelling of 'Rassilon' though. Sorry to nickpick.

[javana12]

Thanks so much for the review. Glad you liked it.

I'll go fix up that spelling mistake now - thanks for pointing it out. And don't worry about nickpicking - I'm hopeless at spelling. So thanks again.

*hugs*

[shinodabear]

This has put me in the mood for banana muffins, thank you. Even better if they come with Jack-in-an-apron. There's nothing like baked goods for that homey feel. Cute. I think you meant Rassilon, though, not Rassolin.

[javana12]

Glad you liked it. We'll have to spread the Banana muffin love. *grin*

Thanks for the spelling hint though. Completely missed it.

Thanks for the review.
*hugs*