Sleeping Rough

[sistercarrion]

Title: Sleeping Rough
Challenge: Life Before Torchwood
Author: sistercarrion
x-posted to carrionscreamin
Rating: PG
Characters: Jack/John
Summary: When they were with the Time Agency. A little night time rumination.
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You snore. I ever tell you that? You snore like a Gorlian buffalo. With a heavy cold. 'Snot natural, Jack. It's positively evil. I fully

Comments

[rustydog]

Oh wow. That really sounds like John, the last two paragraphs with a particular punch.

[sistercarrion]

Thank you! Good to know he comes across well :)

[adafrog]

Oh wow. Well done.

[sistercarrion]

Thank you!

[fajrdrako]

Excellent!

[ptolemy_rekhyt]

wow. love the last two lines.

[mad_jaks]

OH damn You made me feel sorry for John...

right after you had me laughing because there was snoring and then there was "'Snot" - too damn clever by half that was *VBG*