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#DESB: Chapter 14: Burn

Mar 11, 2012 20:36

Title: Burn

Author: hopelessalways (hopelessromantic549 on FF)

Word Count: 4454

Rating: M

Summary: Damon and Elena experience fire dancing.

Notes: AU/AH. Set in the Spring Break Universe. Part of a Round Robin challenge: Table of Contents.

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# elena gilbert, # damon salvatore, de spring break 2012, spring break universe 2012

Comments 31

tvdbonesfanatic March 12 2012, 01:09:10 UTC

This was so amazing. The sex was hot yeah but it was the pureness of Delena. I had tears in my eyes. This was so good. You could see every part of Damon and Elena as different people, Damon and Elena as a couple. It was magical. If i had four thumbs, I would give you four thumbs up but sadly I only have two. :( :) Anyway great chapter and I loved it so much.

hopelessalways March 12 2012, 01:21:52 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I've never written smut before, so it was a challenge to make what you so accurately call the "pureness of Delena" shine through.

sauriemilia March 12 2012, 01:12:24 UTC

Im still swooning, oh they love each other??? No shit...
The scenario was lovely and how it was built up during dinner and the ride back
Just beautiful

hopelessalways March 12 2012, 01:22:11 UTC

Aww, thank you so much :) They make me swoon, too...

scarlett2112 March 12 2012, 01:28:58 UTC

This was absolutely breathtaking.. I loved every word of it.. You wrote the words in such a way that they just flowed. When they got back to the motel, the atmosphere was perfect. The ILY's magical. Damon could seduce a snake I think. The man is just shy of perfect.. Together they are perfect. Outstanding chapter.. Thank you for sharing, it's simply beautiful.

hopelessalways March 14 2012, 14:38:35 UTC

Thank you so much! I for one would be seduced by Damon in a heartbeat - I really wouldn't stand a chance. He really is perfect. *sigh* I'm glad you enjoyed them saying "I love you"; I wasn't sure I wanted to go there, but it just sort of happened.

princessme385 March 12 2012, 01:35:30 UTC

That was gorgeous. Wow, you really did amazing with this.

hopelessalways March 14 2012, 14:43:23 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)

k_stjames March 12 2012, 01:36:49 UTC

Excellent and very loving. I love that this chapter clearly demonstrated their emotional connection and just how far they've come. The ending was very hot and then the ILYs were perfect. Thanks for sharing.