Memoirs of an OC - Special: Songfic Ace
Credits: Lyrics of the song: "Wait For You" by Elliott Yamin from Tor Erik Hermansen, Mikkel Eriksen & Taj Jackson under the label Stargate
Right. When I first saw that this was a songfic, I groaned, because I hate songfics. But when I actually got around to read this songfic, I did more than just groan. I stared at it, and the only thing that came out of my mouth was “GOODGAWDWHATTHEFUCKISTHIS?!” Because this? I don't really know what this is.
I'll do this a bit different than other songfics in that I'll post the lyrics to the song, because they're spread out all over the fic, and you'll get to see what this thing looks like. Let's go.
oOo REPLAY oOo
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Ace ~Wait for You~
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NEW WORLD, EL-DORADO, SALOON, ROOM #3
"Tsk…"
And just what am I supposed to do with these two girls I have on my hands, hum?
Turtlecrackers: I don't know. I suppose you can either wake them up, or let them sleep. Kind of seems obvious to me.
BAM. BAM.
A soft knock on the door…?
Turtlecrackers: Dude. BAM BAM is not the sound of a soft knock, it's a character from the Flintstones. Besides, you could have left out that sound effect without losing anything. In fact, it would probably have made it seem a bit less ridiculous.<
"Ace…?"
Fuu…?
"Ace, are you awake…? I'm coming in, okay…?"
Turtlecrackers: At least wait for him to answer, damn it.
The door opening, sunlight shining in… Tsk, I really have a serious hangover, for my eyes to blink like that and… W… wait a sec… Fuu… Fuu's face blanked out…
Turtlecrackers: You suddenly can't see her face?
Long seconds flying by in silence.
W… why…? W… wait… just… what is…
Turtlecrackers: Are you going to stammer like this all through the chapter? Because if you are, this is going to become annoying.
"Nami wanted our help to go back extract some gold at the mines, this morning…"
Her voice… feels empty…?
Turtlecrackers: Well, what do you think? Did you suddenly forget that you've got two hot cowgirls in bed with you?
"I… So… sorry to have disturbed you!"
Di… disturbed…? Just… WHAT? Oh crap, wait! It's not… she thinks… but I…!
Turtlecrackers: I'm so sick of these damn internal monologues. I mean, is it that hard to just speak normally instead of going on in your head, while probably staring vacantly into space? I'd take dry regular narration over this crap!
BAM.
Th… the door…! Fuu… FUU…
"FUU!"
Turtlecrackers: I'm not sure if you want me to feel sorry for you, because really? I'm not. This is stupid.
I never felt anything in the world like this before,
BAM.
Two girls falling down on the floor…
Turtlecrackers: Dude! It sounds like you killed them!
why would I care?
Turtlecrackers: Because they're human beings too? Also this is not their fault, jackass.
My head spinning like crazy and telling me to go back to bed to sleep my hangover off… why would I care?
Turtlecrackers: Because if you would just go back to sleep, we wouldn't have to have this disjointed whining for eight pages.
More important… catch her back!
Turtlecrackers: Don't you know that that is pretty much the stupidest thing you can do at a moment like this? I mean, wait until she's calmed down a bit, and then talk to her like two adults should.
"Fuu…"
Fuu…
DOKI.
Ugh… Don't give me that look, don't… don't look like you're about to break down because I caught you… Don't…
Turtlecrackers: Maybe it's because you grabbed her and pinned her to the damn wall! I can't imagine why she'd be upset about that!
Now I'm missing you,
And I'm wishing that you would come back through my door.
And just shut up my heart, I know she's like that because… of me… I knew the very second she pulled the door behind her… but I… I just couldn't… I need to tell her…
Turtlecrackers: How did you think she was going to react seeing you in bed with two hot girls? I mean, even if she wasn't in love with you, it would still be awkward to walk in on you like that! Also, will you finish at least half your sentences?!
"What you saw, it's… It's not… well, you weren't supposed to…"
It's a misunderstanding, come on! Don't make that face, I never…
Turtlecrackers: Don't just think it, you idiot.
Wait, can I really say that…? Can I…? I don't even know myself, for these girls… But I don't care about them! I've never cared much about any other girl ending up in my bed before, anyway… so just… just…
Turtlecrackers: I'm sorry, but are you just staring at her while you're thinking this? Because I'm still pretty damn sure that I know why Fuu is so freaked out by this.
Why did you have to go?
You could have let me know,
So now I'm all alone,
Just don't make that face… Why is she avoiding my eyes…? Why is she giving me that kind of answers…?
Turtlecrackers: Because she just walked in on you-- Forget it, I'm just going to repeat myself. Do you really have to ask this? I mean, even I can see how that situation would be completely awkward.
"It's okay, you know… I understand perfectly, so there is no use to justify yourself, Ace… It's fine, so can you… let go of me…?"
TILT.
Let… her… go…
Turtlecrackers: Yes, it's when you take your hands off her and stop pinning her against the wall! Maybe it's a foreign concept to you, Ace, but it's a good idea to learn about it now.
A bitter taste spreading between my teeth.
She hates me…? Does she hate me…?
Turtlecrackers: She just asked you to let go of her! How does that mean she hates you? What the hell kind of conclusion is that to jump to?
SNAP.
What the heck? She left me there as if she didn't care at all,
Turtlecrackers: Which “there” are you referring to? When she freaked out and ran out last night, or when she freaked out and ran away from the room just now? Because when you tried to kiss her last night, you obviously went too far, and when she walked in on you in the room just now, she didn't run away because she doesn't care about you, she ran away because it was awkward! Idiot.
but now she's trembling and obviously lying, are you kidding me?
Turtlecrackers: Maybe because she'll say anything to make you let her go?
What's happening? And don't say it's not my problem, damn it!
"You really don't know how to lie… Do you hate me, now…?"
Turtlecrackers: I hate you. Is that good enough?
Tell me she doesn't hate me, I… I… I want her to tell me!
"I don't…"
She… she doesn't…
DOKI.
But then why… why is she ready to cry…?
Turtlecrackers: Maybe you should try letting her go! My goodness, what is wrong with you?
Girl you could have stayed
but you wouldn't give me a chance
How can she tell me she doesn't hate me but still look that way?
"It was my fault all along, so… don't concern yourself with me…"
Turtlecrackers: I'm starting to feel a bit confused...
Her… fault…?
Turtlecrackers: Yeah, what's up with that? What's supposedly her fault, and why is it her fault? There was never an explanation for that.
What the…? Just what is going on in her mind, I don't get it! Concern… Of course I'm concerned! She looks like she's about to cry, and it's because of me… She says she doesn't hate me but she's running away from me… She says she doesn't care but she can't even lie correctly…
Turtlecrackers: Blaah, blaah, blaah. This insecure little piece of lint is boring me. Can something happen soon?
I want… I just want to…
"Tell her…" whispers a voice in my head.
"Show her…" advices another.
Turtlecrackers: Now you're hearing voices? Also, no. Don't show her. Not right now, you idiot.
With you not around it's a little bit more than I can stand.
Showing her…
SCHLING.
My lips bumping into a light shield, cold, hard, shining sadly…
Turtlecrackers: Serves you right, you creep. She should have zapped you instead, because kissing her right now would only make you seem like you're trying to manipulate her.
What the… Fuu's shield…? Fuu… Fuu used… her power… against ME?
Turtlecrackers: Yes, imagine that. She got fed up with your creepiness and finally put her foot down!
And all your tears they keep running down my face
Why did you turn away?
Tears…!
Turtlecrackers: I'm not sure what the hell he expected. I mean, she walks in on him in bed with two other girls, and as if that's not awkward enough, he chases after her, pins her to the wall and tries to kiss her. I'm not sure what he wanted her to think.
N… w… wait! I… I…
DASH. A fleeting silhouette running down the stairs.
Damn it!
T… tears… I… and it's my fault… and the worst is I can't even remember Fuu crying even once ever since I know her and now…
Turtlecrackers: Hm... No, you're right. She's just been flustered and panicking around you. I'm not sure that's much better.
Now I feel like they're not stopping, these tears… Why? Even when she's not standing in front of me anymore, it's just… And there's this weird bitter taste in my mouth… as if I was crying inside too…
Turtlecrackers: How is it weird? Also, cry me a goddamn river, you creep. I'm not going to feel sorry for you no matter what you do.
So why does your pride make you run and hide?
BAM.
My fist denting the wooden wall.
Turtlecrackers: You'll be lucky if they won't make you pay for that.
DAMN IT!
WHY? Just… just why? I should have… should have… Why am I always messing up things? Why can't she just trust me, trust my feelings?
Turtlecrackers: You're seriously asking why she can't just trust you? Could it be because you're always teasing her at the worst times possible, and won't leave her the hell alone?
TILT. Reminiscences from the evening before.
Turtlecrackers: Let's not. I already went through everything that happened the evening before, and it was boring.
Tsk… How could she trust me…? When in her mind I'm apparently nothing better than a serial lover… and somehow, I didn't even show her wrong yesterday… I just wanted to tease her a little but I ended up doing her the same meaningless things I've been doing to other girls before…
Turtlecrackers: He “didn't even show her wrong”? ...What the hell does that mean? Oh, and gee, I wonder how this happened. I mean, it's not like it was obvious that this was going to happen sooner or later, or anything.
A vague advice flashing back "You'll end up making a mistake you'll regret".
SNAP.
Yeah, I more than regret it now…! Of course I wanted her, I still want her… I can't even manage to know if I did something with these two cow-girls last night because my whole body is only craving for her, tsk…
Turtlecrackers: Since you were all fully clothed when you woke up, I'm thinking that it's pretty safe to say that nothing happened, even if the narration hadn't assured us that nothing happened in the last chapter. Also, now that I think about it, why is this “craving” supposedly better than what the other men are feeling for Fuu? It's still just lust, damn it.
But what about her… for me…?
Are you that afraid of me?
Why is she looking that devastated every time I'm getting closer to her? Why can't she take my kissing her or the rest seriously? Why does she look so sad and run away?
Turtlecrackers: Because she thinks you're just playing with her, you moron. It's all your own fault.
But I know it's a lie what you keep inside.
Why is she saying such stupid lies like 'she doesn't care' while she cares enough to cry for it? Why is this idiot always pretending she's fine when she's not…?
When it's obvious for everyone - even that Baka-Otouto - that I'm a bit special to her… why? What does she want, damn it?
Turtlecrackers: I don't think even she knows that.
This is not how you want it to be…
TILT.
Or is it just… my fault…?
My fault because… even if I know she despises playboys, I'm still playing a bit with her because I find it amusing…
Turtlecrackers: Stop sinning your ass off. If you know that it's wrong, don't do it. Making fun of her is not going to endear her to you.
because even if I know she's afraid of getting closer, I'm still pulling her to me… because even if I know she doesn't trust my feelings, I'm still not clearly telling her the truth because I'm the one afraid of her answer…?
So in the end… even if I know she doesn't want it like that… I'm just the one being pushy…?
Turtlecrackers: Ya think?
BAM. My hand grabbing the railing to counter dizziness.
Ugh… throbbing nauseas and black dots… speak about the worst timing for my hangover to wake up!
Turtlecrackers: His hangover fell asleep somewhere in there? I can't say I'm surprised, though. This is very boring and repetitive.
Swinging doors opening wide on a messy cloud of dust.
Thieves have run down the High Street, according to the huge bustle of cow-boys pressing themselves outside.
Turtlecrackers: Boring prose putting everyone to sleep. *snores obnoxiously loud*
Where is she…?
TILT. My eyes catching sight of a hazelnut-haired silhouette.
Turtlecrackers: So... just a shadow with a mop of hair covered in hazelnuts? That's an odd image.
…
Words choking down into my throat…
Turtlecrackers: That's not the words. That's me. *strangles him*
What am I supposed to tell her…? "Sorry"…? Yeah, sure, I really regret the way I behaved with her yesterday and this morning but…
Turtlecrackers: Wait until she's calm again, and then talk to her like an adult. Why is this difficult?
Images rushing through my head: unknown girls, tears, black memory…
Turtlecrackers: Black mem- Oh, for crying out loud, I hope that's not the Blackbeard memories again. What does that have to do with anything here?
Hesitation…
Should I… rush to her to apologize…?
Turtlecrackers: No, I think that's a bad idea.
Should I hold her…?
Turtlecrackers: Sure, if you want to make it worse.
Should I yell to her she's the only one for me…?
Turtlecrackers: It's better if you wait, really. She won't believe you anyway right now.
While I might have spent the night with two other random girls and not even remember it? What would that make me look like, tsk… Kakkowarui…
Turtlecrackers: Yeah, because looking cool is more important than making sure to solve a stupid misunderstanding. Got it.
Insecurity…
Turtlecrackers: Damn right. Why the hell is Firefist Ace portrayed as this spineless, whiny little kid? Do guys really second guess themselves this much in general?
What about her…? What does she think about it…? What would she like to hear from me…? What am I supposed to do not to make things worse?
Turtlecrackers: Leave. Her. Alone. At least for now. Why is this a difficult concept?
So Baby I will wait for you,
Cause I don't know what else I can do…
Should I wait…? Wait to see how things are going on, on her side…?
On her side, a calm composure when everyone else is erupting over the robbery.
Turtlecrackers: Wait... This isn't part of the last chapter.
Does she really care so little about what happened that she recovered in a couple of minutes…?
Turtlecrackers: Are you really this stupid, or are you just trying to piss me off?
Or is it that she's once more quite good at hiding her real feelings…?
TILT. Eyes making contact… before running away.
Second option… I knew it…
Turtlecrackers: Dude. If you can figure out that she's hiding her true feelings, then she's not very good at it. Just saying.
Don't tell me I ran out of time,
If it takes the rest of my life…
What am I supposed to do if she doesn't even leave me the opportunity to apologize…? Don't tell me it's too late? Don't tell me she doesn't even want to look at me anymore?
Turtlecrackers: Are you serious? It's been, what? Two minutes since she ran off? *hits her head against a wall*
Panic… worry… but a pair of amber eyes finally rising towards me.
A faint blush on her cheeks and a shared expression.
Turtlecrackers: I'm not sure what this “shared” expression is supposed to be, to be perfectly honest.
She… she seems to… Well, she has some reasons to be mad at me, it's true, but… Grr…
Turtlecrackers: But what? What's your justification?
She can hate me, it's fine! But then, I want her to get angry at me, to show SHE CARES! Is that asking too much…?
Turtlecrackers: Actually, now that I think about it, he's got a point there. It's a tiny one, but it's a point I may think is valid here. I mean, I can see why he'd want her to just get angry and shout at him or something like that instead of running away and then acting really... weird by smiling and having a “shared” expression and then running away again.
Tsk, is it something that will never happen…? How stupid, I can't seriously be wishing for her to be irritated at me…? Well, sure it's better than her ignoring me, but… I'm seriously crazy, sigh…
A faint smile on her hesitating lips.
Turtlecrackers: See? I mean, I'm willing to agree with the guy. How are you supposed to interpret that? Can't they just talk to each other and work it out? Why is this so hard?
TILT.
Baby I will wait for you,
If you think I'm fine it just ain't true…
She… smiled…?
Why? I was the one who made her cry and she looks at me as if I'm the one who needs to be comforted, tsk… But then… it means… means she cares, then? She must definitely care, right?
Turtlecrackers: My goodness, will you shut the hell up already? I'm sorry, but this is grating on my nerves. I find it so hard to keep my interest up regarding this whiny idiot.
She's keeping her distance for now, but this smile is encouragement enough, right? If I wait long enough, she'll eventually turn my way, despite everything… right…?
My lips trembling in hesitation.
It was my fault for playing around with her and hoping it will make her fall onto my lap like any other girl… so… it's just fair, somehow… I can wait the time she needs… I'll just let it go her pace… I'll just… I just want her not to turn around!
Turtlecrackers: I... I can't take much more of this. *cracks open a can of star fruit cider*
She might think I'm a playboy for whom any girl would do, but she can't even imagine how bitter it feels to see her averting her eyes from me, tsk…
Turtlecrackers: But this isn't about you, Ace. You're not giving her any reason to believe that you actually care more about her than about any other girl. I hate Fuu, but really? She's not in the wrong here.
I really need you in my life,
No matter what I have to do I'll wait for you…
Damn it…! Even if she doesn't answer my feelings now, I know I won't be able to turn away… She's just… she is just… Marco was right all along, she's just not like any other girl for me, and I perfectly know it…
A faint smile in answer, for her.
If the only way left is to wait… then it's decided…
Turtlecrackers: Why does that sound so ominous?
One of the thieves finally letting go of their hide-out location, this Baka-otouto's girlfriend running after them, everyone jogging towards the ranch…
Turtlecrackers: Wait... Waaaait. Is this plot? Plot is going on while Ace is whining? Why are we focusing on Ace's whining instead of the plot? Go to the plot!
and her eyes lost as they always are when deep in thought.
Turtlecrackers: You mean when she spaces out for no goddamn reason? I hate that, because that means more pointless thought-narration.
It's been a long time since you called me,
(How could you forget about me)
What could she be thinking about…? For some reason, I hope and fear it would be about me… or maybe I'm just blinding myself with wishful thinking once more…
Turtlecrackers: Yeah, I'm pretty sure it's about you. Or about the Gold Core. Because I can't really see her caring about anything that doesn't directly involve herself in some way.
You got me feeling crazy (crazy)
I really can't get what is going through her mind… nor why she always seems to hesitate or why there is so much conflict in her eyes when she looks at me…
She's making me greedy, making me anxious, driving me crazy…
Turtlecrackers: Dude. You need to back the hell off and cool off. Because this? This is creepy!
and I can't even get a grasp of what is happening in HER heart…
How can you walk away,
Running just next to me but without giving me a single glance… Dragging behind as usual but not arguing with me about it as usual…
Turtlecrackers: So, is she running next to your or dragging behind? Ẃhich is it?
A sulking nostalgic feeling…
Turtlecrackers: Stop sulking!
Everything stays the same,
I just can't do it Baby…
I miss it, I already miss it… The way she's always around me, the way she's pestering when I tease her but still not averting her eyes from mine, the way she blushes and talk back to me but still smiles heart-fully… I miss it all!
Turtlecrackers: After all of that, how can you not get that she likes you? Is there some kind of filter made out of dumb that's blocking the information?
What will it take to make you come back?
Girl I told you what it is and it just ain't like that…
I already can't take it anymore…
Mounting a horse while deep in thoughts.
Turtlecrackers: Not noticing that he sat backwards in the saddle.
Catching sight of a late silhouette arriving at the ranch while everyone else is already mounting the other horses available.
Turtlecrackers: I thought she was running next to you. How the hell did she end up that far behind?
I want her… I want her back!
Turtlecrackers: But you were never together! And it's been... what? Ten minutes since you were at the saloon? Jeez. This narration sucks.
Back as usual, back at my side…
TILT. A sudden realization on the number of the horses and the number of riders.
Turtlecrackers: What, are they too cheap to get horses for everyone? Also, who is Zoro riding with this time?
Should I… Should I get her back…?
Hesitation…
Why can't you look at me, you're still in love with me,
Don't leave me crying.
Holding out my hand… to her… trying to hide my insecurity under a smile.
"Let's ride together" suggests a voice in my head, but my lips are too afraid to pronounce it.
W… will she take it…?
Turtlecrackers: Why the hell are you stammering like that?
Baby why can't we just start over again?
Just like before… just the same as usual, I want her to look at me with a sulking face, and then fight with me to be the one guiding the horse…
Turtlecrackers: Uh, yeah, because that's what you usually do, or something?
Get it back to the way it was…
Just like before, I want her to look at me and give me one of her usual smiles…
If you give me a chance I can love you right,
Just leave me a chance to be like that again with you… I won't ask for more, I promise… Well, hum… at least I won't push you for it… I'll just… I'll wait, so just… just… just leave me a chance…
Turtlecrackers: Is he trying to sing in his head... in the middle of a songfic? Because that's what it seems like right now.
But you're telling me it won't be enough…
Hesitation in her eyes, long seconds flying by in silence, a bitter feeling starting to invade my mouth.
…
P… please take my hand…
Turtlecrackers: … Will you stop stammering? Ace isn't this insecure!
GRAB.
A slender hand being placed in mine.
DOKI.
She… she…
A wave of happiness spreading inside me like an electric spark, as I lift her up in front of me.
Turtlecrackers: Why does she ride with Ace if she's supposed to be upset with him?
So Baby I will wait for you,
Cause I don't know what else I can do…
Don't tell me I ran out of time,
If it takes the rest of my life…
A smile spreading on my lips without me even controlling it.
She accepted! She… accepted it!
Turtlecrackers: YES. We got that. Thank you. Move on now, please.
Baby I will wait for you,
If you think I'm fine it just ain't true…
I really need you in my life,
No matter what I have to do I'll wait for you…
I wonder if she can hear my heart pouncing like crazy in my chest…? Does she realize how much it represents for me…?
Should I…? No, no no and NO! I said I'll wait patiently. I said I'll wait for her to be ready, tsk! I decided I won't make any more blunders by being pushy and forcing my wishes onto her, so just chill out, myself!
Turtlecrackers: Wow. You should have thought about that a long time ago. Then you wouldn't be in this situation.
I said I'll wait!
Turtlecrackers: But Ace's raging boner wouldn't listen. It was very sad.
A ride in the desert at triple gallop after a bunch of thieves.
A gradual realization… and my smile fading away.
Turtlecrackers: More boring prose.
She's not speaking to me… She's not even rising her eyes towards me…
Turtlecrackers: You're still surprised about this?
So why does your pride make you run and hide?
Are you that afraid of me?
A bitter taste spreading again in my mouth.
Turtlecrackers: Well, if you would just stop chewing the scenery, you wouldn't get that.
She hasn't forgiven me at all, has she?
Turtlecrackers: NO! YOU THINK SO?!
She just accepted to ride with me because there wasn't much other possibility, did she…? or maybe because everyone else was looking and in a hurry, tsk…
Turtlecrackers: Why would it matter if everyone else was looking?
But I know it's a lie what you keep inside.
This is not how you want it to be…
So in the end, she's making others' wishes come first and quiets down her own wished deep inside, once again…?
Turtlecrackers: Oh for fuck's sake! No, authors, this does not make me think Fuu is selfless.
My hands tightening around the reins out of frustration.
How am I supposed to cope with that? How am I supposed to understand what is happening in her heart if she doesn't even show a bit of her real feelings?
Turtlecrackers: Has it ever occurred to you that the reason she doesn't show you what she really feels is because you haven't given her any reason to trust you?
So Baby I will wait for you,
Baby I will wait for you,
If it's the last thing I do…
A long sigh of resignation.
Should I just be patient…? Should I just wait for her to open up…? Damn it, is that the only thing I can do?
Turtlecrackers: YES! Because this would be the nice thing to do. If you push her like you've been doing this far, you'll clearly only end up pushing her away.
A disaffected section of the mines entering our view.
My passenger jumping on the ground as soon as I stopped the horse and dashing towards this Baka-otouto without a single glance back.
Turtlecrackers: Pick a tense and stick with it, damn it. Also, “this Baka-otouto?” His name is Luffy! At least have him call Luffy by his name in the damn narration.
Tsk…
So Baby I will wait for you,
Cause I don't know what else I can do…
Don't tell me I ran out of time,
If it takes the rest of my life…
Tsk… I can understand what is going on through Luffy's mind just now… I also agree with him, but…
Turtlecrackers: Uh. I don't. I don't know what the hell is going on. Because guess what I think? I think this is a recap of things that haven't happened yet in this story. I think we'll have to hear about all of this from Fuu's POV in the next chapter.
My fists turning white as I clench them to hold back the urge to enter the discussion.
Patience, patience… Don't make a fuss now… don't make it worse by fighting with her right now…
Turtlecrackers: Uh. Why would you start to fight with her? What the hell is going on? Would it kill you to spend more time on the damn narration of what's going on around you than on the whining?
Baby I will wait for you,
If you think I'm fine it just ain't true…
I really need you in my life,
No matter what I have to do I'll wait for you…
Everyone entering the gallery to make some thieves regret to have stolen our gold, and among them a hazelnut-haired girl who now seems more focused on this expedition than on me…
Turtlecrackers: Yes. Heaven forbid that she focuses on the stolen gold and some actual plot than on your petty misunderstanding. Grow the fuck up.
I'll be waiting…
oOo
Authors' Note: We need to ask your comment on this chapter. Please tell to us if you like the concept 'Replay'. We will decide to put more of them in the future when we look at your reviews. Thank you.
Turtlecrackers: Gladly. I hate this concept. I really do. I don't know why you thought that eight pages of Ace whining that he can't get his way was a good idea, but I don't think it works at all. You're recapping things that will come up in the next chapter!
The prose is choppy and in the later half of the chapter, I have no idea what's going on because Ace just whines and whines, and doesn't even bother to hint at anything except his bottom-less angst. I'm guessing that he's supposed to be too distraught to think about his surroundings, but really? No, there's no urgency in his tone, and he just keeps repeating himself over and over without really saying much.
I don't get why people like this, although I'm glad that some reviews suggested not to put too many of these things in the story. I don't want to go through another one of these again.
Next time... er, this again, but from Fuu's POV and hopefully with more plot. Please? Pretty please?
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