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[Kyusung] Status Quo

Nov 28, 2011 10:15

Title: Status Quo
Pairing: Kyusung [Kyuhyun x Yesung]
Rating: PG
Length: Oneshot
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters :(
Summary: Sometimes, it's simply too difficult to change the status quo and take a blind leap of faith.

10 Settings Challenge: #1 - Lake

( The sunlight reflected off the lake as Kyuhyun closed his eyes, enjoying the feeling of floating on the water. )

rating:pg, character:kyuhyun, fandom:super junior, pairing:kyusung, challenge:10 settings, character:yesung

Comments 19

cookiedrabbles November 28 2011, 16:37:43 UTC

Hi! :D First of all, I love your username! It's so cute! <3

I really like your writing style! It's simple yet descriptive and beautiful <3

Thanks for writing this! :D

turtleclouds November 28 2011, 22:40:23 UTC

Hehe thanks. I love Yesung, so it was 100% Jongwoon inspired.

Thank you! :) I'm glad you enjoyed reading this ^_^

lalilula November 28 2011, 17:23:07 UTC

it saddened me that they both thought that their love is unrequited. but this is beautifully written.

turtleclouds November 28 2011, 22:41:34 UTC

Thank you for all the nice comments <3
I'm glad you liked this! :)

allspecialsmile November 28 2011, 21:55:01 UTC

Ok, I'm sure now : I LOVE YOUR FICS.
I will wait before reading the other one, just because I hate character deaths x___x but if it's written by you, it must be great anyway :3
Just keep writing, that's awesome ♥

turtleclouds November 28 2011, 22:43:34 UTC

Aww thank you dear! <3
I'm glad you enjoy my fics ^_^

Yeah...the other one was a bit of an experiment - never going to kill a character off again. Too painful LOL.

denden143 November 28 2011, 22:08:15 UTC

SPOT!!!
Sad :((( Im not first anymore~

denden143 November 28 2011, 22:33:14 UTC

Awwww!!! I love this eventhough they didn't confess their feelings for each other and they didn't officially become together...I just love the pureness of their love for each other that they can even enjoyed the status quo between them :D

You're good at descriptions that I know even without conversations you can definitely pull it off :D You have a natural gift in writing and you're definitely one of my favorite writer...keep it up!!

Can't wait for the next 8...Gotta be quick in commenting this time..I have to protect my image of a ninja anyway..xDDD!!

Hwaiting Nana!!!

turtleclouds November 28 2011, 22:45:59 UTC

Aww Den don't worry, you'll always be a ninja in my heart <3
I'm glad you liked this! :)

Hwaiting! I'm looking forward to reading your fics too! :D

denden143 November 28 2011, 22:56:27 UTC

Really??? Awww..thanks!! I'll be your Number 1 ninja forever!! xDD!!

Of course I like this,,Yesung didn't die..LOL!! But no,,this is really beautiful...

Oh,,Im taking a rest for a while so I don't know when will that be :D

phoenix_soar November 29 2011, 07:26:23 UTC

Your narrative is beautifully detailed. You created an amazing feeling and atmosphere in this fic, too. I find it pretty fitting for the YeKyu ^^

It was sort of melancholic and bittersweet, that both of their feelings were mutual but they were unaware of it, but so beautiful! Great work!

turtleclouds November 29 2011, 14:49:14 UTC

I'm happy you think it's fitting :D And that you liked the atmosphere too!
I try to make it work well for our two precious boys :3

Thanks for reading & all the sweet comments!