FOB: Patrick/Pete -- Words Unspoken By Me

Sep 09, 2008 14:48

Happy birthday, duoshinigami. You're a wonderful person, and I hope this is a little like you wanted.

Patrick/Pete
1100 words
Beta read by ephemera_pop. Any remaining mistakes are mine and mine alone.

Words Unspoken By Me )

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llamabitchyo September 9 2008, 16:39:24 UTC
Aww, sweet. ♥

And the drawing on each other. Mmm, so sexy without really being about sex at all. :)

"I thought, a comet. Brilliance brought to earth."

And that line is so awesome.

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turps33 September 9 2008, 16:48:15 UTC
Apparently I'm all about schmoop today.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting ♥

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llamabitchyo September 9 2008, 17:07:34 UTC
Dude, I should have been like those crazy comment posts, and said "FIRST!!!1! OMG! Woot! First to comment on Terri's newest fic! I rock!!!"

;)

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turps33 September 9 2008, 17:09:45 UTC
It'll be a cold day in hell before I'm popular enough for people to have that reaction.

But, I have seen the cool kids offering first comment cookies, so you want? ;)

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turlough September 9 2008, 20:02:19 UTC
This is lovely! So quiet and thoughtful and I love the contrast between Patrick and Pete.

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turps33 September 10 2008, 09:24:21 UTC
Thank you!

You know how nervous I was about writing this, but I like how it turned out. So I'm glad you like it too ♥

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duoshinigami September 9 2008, 21:20:55 UTC
Hold on. This might take a moment because my heart has exploded all over the room and I need to go collect all the pieces to keep living ( ... )

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turps33 September 10 2008, 09:27:30 UTC
You are the best ever!

I'm thrilled you liked it. I must admit, I was thrown a little when you asked for FOB because they're a band I've only written in passing. Plus, it's you, and I wanted something you'd actually like.

I have to agree about Patrick's thighs too. I mean, who wouldn't want to straddle those?

Thank you, honey! ♥

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clumsygyrl September 9 2008, 21:39:10 UTC
look how my tattoo and sharpie kink come into play with this.

yet oddly sweet and awwwww-worthy.

<333

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turps33 September 10 2008, 09:29:46 UTC
kinks and sweetness in one. A nice combination I feel.

I'm glad you liked because I always get nervous attempting something new. So, thank you <3

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frausorge September 10 2008, 04:40:50 UTC
N'AWWWW. I love the idea of Patrick coming around to communicating with Pete on terms Pete will get.

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turps33 September 10 2008, 09:30:43 UTC
Patrick is a smart guy, he knows how to get through to Pete.

Thank you so much ♥

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