FOB: Patrick/Pete -- Words Unspoken By Me

Sep 09, 2008 14:48

Happy birthday, duoshinigami. You're a wonderful person, and I hope this is a little like you wanted.

Patrick/Pete
1100 words
Beta read by ephemera_pop. Any remaining mistakes are mine and mine alone.

Words Unspoken By Me )

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turps33 September 10 2008, 19:31:20 UTC
You're such a star for reading. One of the bright ones that Pete and Patrick are looking at.

I'm so glad you liked, thank you :)

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cynthia_arrow September 10 2008, 16:53:37 UTC
This was lovely, such a calm, kind of dreamy, intimate story. Thanks for sharing it. :)

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turps33 September 10 2008, 19:32:22 UTC
Thank you :)

It was that kind of atmosphere I was going for. So I'm glad it worked for you.

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ohfreckle September 12 2008, 22:09:58 UTC
I love the initmate feeling, and your quiet way of telling this story. Beautiful, thank you.

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turps33 September 16 2008, 09:15:57 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed. Thank you for letting me know <3

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