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Organized Chaos (Twenty-Two)

Aug 12, 2012 10:03

Title: Organized Chaos
Author: Katie
Pairing: Jack Barakat/ OC
Rating: NC-17
Summary: “Yes. You're scared. And, I mean, you should be. I'm telling you that I'm going to be forcing you to face your fears. And that's fucking scary. But what I'm also saying is that I'm going to help you through it. So it's going to be fucking scary, but I'm going to be ( Read more... )

chaptered: organized chaos, rating: nc-17, pairing: jack barakat/ oc

Comments 7

daydream4way August 12 2012, 21:17:27 UTC

Awwww my babies are SOOOO cute when they're making up :D

turnthepageover August 13 2012, 03:01:33 UTC

Aren't they? haha

sammiturnmeon August 13 2012, 00:51:26 UTC

I think Jack isn't angry enough. Jack should be pissed. And Vina's a bitch and I hate her.

That's all. xD

turnthepageover August 13 2012, 03:02:01 UTC

Oh gosh.
You can't hate her. The sequel is about her, lmfao.

sammiturnmeon August 13 2012, 03:36:44 UTC

NO UGHH. She's not likeable! Katie why do you do this to me? Wait, is this even Katie? WHO IS THIS?! *sobs*

turnthepageover August 13 2012, 03:46:45 UTC

lmfao. But Alex likes her.
Yes this is Katie. Stop crying ;)

abbyliciousness December 5 2012, 04:10:45 UTC

ok so im reading and reading and I have to comment I cant make it to the end without commenting. HOW DID I NOT READ THIS FIRST? THIS IS AMAZING AND I LOVE IT. Ok first off LVOE THE STORY LINE. I really like how its not focused on like smut and its an actual story and its not like insta relationship WOO WOO WOO. Wyatt and Jack are SO UBER CUTE and I love how Jack is helping Wyatt break out of his shell and like yea so cute. Wyatts mom sucks though man. Shes like i dont even know. But crazy is one word at least. You keep on being amazing!