fic - i backward cast my e'e part 26 [novella]

[turnippatch]

Title:  I Backward Cast My E'e
Part:  26

Comments

[lavendarlizard]

OMS...! That was just so adorable it almost made me cry... O_O I should just fall back on giddy squeeing, shouldn't I? ^__________^

They are just so CUTE! *giggles hysterically*

[turnippatch]

Hm.  I distinctly recall saying I was trying to avoid the word 'adorable'... and yet I notice I used it directly in the text. -_-

[lavendarlizard]

It's the only possible word! ^____^ Even your subconscious knows! *snork!*

[turnippatch]

Hmmm.  'Cute'?  No, too boring.  Umm, how about... precious? ^^ Darling?  Squishy?

[sunhawk16]

Sometimes adorable just happens and you have to accept it and move on.
In fact, we are fine with accepting adorable. *nod nod*
So sweet! ^________^

[turnippatch]

Aha.  'Sweet'.  Now there's an obvious word that I missed...

[ravelqueen]

you made them sleep with each other, gave us all the pertinent details and still manfully refrained from anything close to a lemon, you wily woman you^^

that was very, very cute (or precious) and just so on with the characters in this universe and very much like a real first time of blind leading the blind, I would think

I know you shouldn't go *squeee* over people roughly my own age (even fictional ones) but...HeerO!! *squeeeeeeee*

[turnippatch]

You know, I really did sit around thinking about it for a while, but eventually came to the conclusion that I really didn't have anything all that interesting to say about the deed itself.  They still had to have their chat afterward, so it seemed there was no point in being redundant.

The guys in this universe... hmm, actually one of the few times I've ever really written any of my guys actually getting to the sex part without having already been involved with each other.