[Fic Update] Black Dream

[tsumetaitsubasa]

Title: Black Dream
Author: Winter's Light/Eternal Snow/ tsumetaitsubasa
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Shonen ai, OOCness
Summary: [Ryo-centric] How far will he be buried in his dreams until someone pulls him out?
Disclaimer: I do not own Prince of Tennis.
Previous chapters:Chapter One | Side Story I: Echizen | Chapter Two | Chapter Three

Comments

[tai_hime]

It seems like I'm first to comment again, huh?

Anyway, another awesome chapter! You still manage to subtly convey the friendship and caring everyone has at Seigaku for Ryoma while focusing on other things and the way you flawlessly make the transition from real world!Seigaku to fantasy!Seigaku is really neat. Tezuka's amusement at everyone and at what was going on had me smiling and I like the way you made Ryoma so perceptive to the sudden changes in the look-a-like's personality. He can tell when it is the person he knows or the one that belongs to that world. You have me wondering what will happen next and hoping for a new chapter soon.

[tsumetaitsubasa]

Yeah. I thank you for that!

I love you so much 'cause when you comment, I know you actually read it. *hugs* You have me crying for joy.

I thank you. Yes, I suppose Ryoma saw the difference due to the fact that he has been around Seigaku!Tezuka for quite some time rather than the Fantasy!Tezuka.

God, I love you. *glomps*

Thanks so much!!