Comments | tsuki_no_bara: LJ Idol, Season 11

tsuki_no_bara

LJ Idol, Season 11 - Week 14

Feb 20, 2020 01:12

Title: A Helping Hand and Cold Hard Cash
Topic: barn raising

( Russo walks out of the head )

real lj idol, misc fic

Comments 14

adoptedwriter February 20 2020, 13:00:30 UTC

Good dialogue usage in this. Moves the story right along.

tsuki_no_bara February 22 2020, 04:28:54 UTC

thank you! dialogue is fun. :D

m_malcontent February 20 2020, 17:27:07 UTC

This is fun....like AW said the dialog is brisk

tsuki_no_bara February 22 2020, 04:29:27 UTC

the dialogue is mostly the result of me talking to myself. *looks shifty* i'm glad you liked it. :D

karmasoup February 21 2020, 02:27:41 UTC

I like this continuation. I have a feeling things are not going to go as smoothly for them as they would hope, but I also get the feeling they're used to being prepared to expect the unexpected.

tsuki_no_bara February 22 2020, 05:15:06 UTC

things do have a tendency to go a little sideways.... whether the guys and alesa are prepared or not is a whole other thing.

tonithegreat February 22 2020, 02:50:46 UTC

This is a delightful take on the subject! Sometimes comforting characterization among friends is just the thing.

tsuki_no_bara February 25 2020, 03:52:13 UTC

thank you! it can't be all action all the time. :D sometimes it's dialogue with lunch.

banana_galaxy February 22 2020, 03:44:29 UTC

Jamie seems like an adorable person here. Wanting to help out like that.

tsuki_no_bara February 25 2020, 04:06:06 UTC

well, thank you. :D he has a thing for geni, so if he can come to her rescue, he's going to.