LJ Idol, Season 11 - Week 14

[tsuki_no_bara]

Title: A Helping Hand and Cold Hard Cash
Topic: barn raising

Comments

[halfshellvenus]

There's such a natural, realistic feeling to this despite being set on a space-ship in the future.

I like the twist of the prompt toward "bar raising," and that pitching in with finances is in the same spirit as actual labor. :)

[tsuki_no_bara]

thank you! i figure people will still talk like people, even in the future. just the slang might be different. (not that i have any slang, but you know.)

>>and that pitching in with finances is in the same spirit as actual labor. :) <<

well, they may end up doing both....

[d0gs]

Great dialogue!

[tsuki_no_bara]

thank you!