50 Word Excerpt #5
Week 5
Surprise
He thought his secret was perfect, but the strong scent of cacao gave him away. Dark. Venezuelan. I feign wonder as I tug and the ribbon yields. But my surprise is genuine as the chocolate melts into crisp apple and pear.
His smile tells me he planned it all along.
Surprise
He thought his secret was perfect, but the strong scent of cacao gave him away. Dark. Venezuelan. I feign wonder as I tug and the ribbon yields. But my surprise is genuine as the chocolate melts into crisp apple and pear.
His smile tells me he planned it all along.
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