50 Word Excerpt #5

Mar 20, 2009 22:24

Week 5

Surprise
He thought his secret was perfect, but the strong scent of cacao gave him away. Dark. Venezuelan. I feign wonder as I tug and the ribbon yields. But my surprise is genuine as the chocolate melts into crisp apple and pear.

His smile tells me he planned it all along.

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