Beautiful Insanity - Chapter Seventeen

[tsubasa_quill]

Title: Beautiful Insanity
Ratings: T/16+
Characters based upon: Inoo Kei, Arioka Daiki, Okamoto Keito, Yamada Ryosuke
Inspired by : The Video Game "Alice Madness Returns" and a school test (weird?? it's a long story)
Setting : A small English Village (fictional), London, Umbria Home(fictional)
Time Line : The year is 2014
Genre: AU! Horror, mystery,

Comments

[9reen4pple]

poor Daisuke (TT-TT) *hugs Daiki* his stepmom is probably that crazy jealous type (><)

i don't see a problem to live with a grandparent, it sounds quite nice XD

[tsubasa_quill]

Neither do I and of course neither does Daisuke, he loves his grandma the most <3

My grandma used to spoil me like anything :P

[9reen4pple]

yup, grandparents always let you do what your parents won't XD

[kazuko59]

O_o Daisuke has such a sad past.. i feel like crying.. Sayuri was just so mean to him..
this is really remind me of Tantei Gakuen Q^^~ but better XD.. i really love Daisuke-Kei interaction.. they r really close..
nice choice of song, by the way.. lacie fits perfectly with the reminiscing part^^..

[tsubasa_quill]

The idea of blaming our actions on family or blood is an easy way out of situations. A person has a conciousness and with enough knowledge of the world knows right from wrong. Sometimes people do wrong not because they were born "evil", there is no such thing, they do wrong because they are too weak to do what's right which is always the hardest but the most rewarding of the choices...that's what I believe in at least...and that's what made me include it in this side of the plot :)

I just love Lacie, it's so soothing, deep, nostalgic <3

thanx for reading and commenting <3

[tsubasa_quill]

sorry about the rambling, i sometimes take my plot bunnies too seriously :P

[kazuko59]

it's alright, i kind of enjoy reading it^^~ n it shows how much thought u put in writing this story:) a good story is the one who taught us smtn n in the same time we enjoy reading it^^..
it's true, though, what u said... ppl these days r full of prejudices.. not saying that i'm not.. all of us have our own prejudices, it's smtn we can't help, in my opinion.. it's just whether we choose to act on it or not..
i love lacie <3.. i think i like music box like songs.. once i found love so sweet in music box n i can't stop listening to it for days (^_^;)
p.s. now i'm the 1 who's rambling (^_^;)..

[ichigocherry]

First thing first, is this the 18th chapter or the 17th? Because the title said the latter but in the post, you mentioned the former. I was a bit confused. Afraid to have missed the 17th.

Okay! Real comment! xD;;
Ooh, it felt different now, your writing style. Maybe it's because all the mindfuck-alice-crazy-wonderland-state was gone for this chapter. Urgh, I feel like I want to strangle Daisuke's step mom. Dammit.

Daichannnnn. /hugs don't worry I'm here. xD

I was a bit confused at the "You really are one of them" thing. I still don't get it. :x what does his father mean, though?

Such a loving obachaan. :3 Daichan's dad should have followed her words when she said she'd take care of him.

<3 <3 <3

[tsubasa_quill]

I'm so sorry it's the 17th chapter, i accidentally wrote 18th, had my head in the clouds :P but it's chapter 17th :)

That;s why i chose a different OST too, cause it was a slightly different chapter...

oh that....well, Daisuke's mom was the daughter of the head of the Black Rose society so he supposed Daisuke inherited violent aspects of his nature from that side of the family. Sorry for the confusion!!

The plot shuffles from side to side, Daisuke's a very important character, relationship-wise both to Ruka and Kei so it was significant to explain the nature of his life and home cause that's where the story will play out next, but Kei's gonna have to be the one to save Ruka, the boy's not completely out of the darkness yet.

[ichigocherry]

Okay. :D

It's okay. xD I'm always just a little slow.

ooooooooh, okay. :3 I gettit. Sorry for all this! x__x

[zeon_avalanthe]

late is late.. *shot*

anyway.. off with the story..
this revelation of Daisuke's past is like a connecting door to another maze in this giant labyrinth you called 'beautiful insanity'.. *smirks*
but well, this kinda clears some things up.. like why Diauke seemed to be so fond of the prospect of having a 'family'..

but well, guess i need to read more to find out more~

thx for the update, Tsu-chan~
*glomps*

[tsubasa_quill]

And my reply is later :(

gomen ne...

thanx for reading dear!

[hiyoshichii]

Poor Dai-chan....... He keeps blaming himself.

Thanks for the chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter!