Beautiful Insanity - Chapter Seventeen

[tsubasa_quill]

Title: Beautiful Insanity
Ratings: T/16+
Characters based upon: Inoo Kei, Arioka Daiki, Okamoto Keito, Yamada Ryosuke
Inspired by : The Video Game "Alice Madness Returns" and a school test (weird?? it's a long story)
Setting : A small English Village (fictional), London, Umbria Home(fictional)
Time Line : The year is 2014
Genre: AU! Horror, mystery,

Comments

[ichigocherry]

First thing first, is this the 18th chapter or the 17th? Because the title said the latter but in the post, you mentioned the former. I was a bit confused. Afraid to have missed the 17th.

Okay! Real comment! xD;;
Ooh, it felt different now, your writing style. Maybe it's because all the mindfuck-alice-crazy-wonderland-state was gone for this chapter. Urgh, I feel like I want to strangle Daisuke's step mom. Dammit.

Daichannnnn. /hugs don't worry I'm here. xD

I was a bit confused at the "You really are one of them" thing. I still don't get it. :x what does his father mean, though?

Such a loving obachaan. :3 Daichan's dad should have followed her words when she said she'd take care of him.

<3 <3 <3

Now it's not really much about Kei, ne? The spotlight's more on to Dai-chan and Ruka. (though, Dai-chan only in this case.)

I wonder what's next? Will Ruka do something to the mentioned Stepmom? There has to be another reason why she's a character in the story other than being the reason of Dai-chan's and his dad's 'relationship'. Hmmmmmmmmmm. xD I'm overthinking, lol.

Good job!!!

[tsubasa_quill]

I'm so sorry it's the 17th chapter, i accidentally wrote 18th, had my head in the clouds :P but it's chapter 17th :)

That;s why i chose a different OST too, cause it was a slightly different chapter...

oh that....well, Daisuke's mom was the daughter of the head of the Black Rose society so he supposed Daisuke inherited violent aspects of his nature from that side of the family. Sorry for the confusion!!

The plot shuffles from side to side, Daisuke's a very important character, relationship-wise both to Ruka and Kei so it was significant to explain the nature of his life and home cause that's where the story will play out next, but Kei's gonna have to be the one to save Ruka, the boy's not completely out of the darkness yet.

[ichigocherry]

Okay. :D

It's okay. xD I'm always just a little slow.

ooooooooh, okay. :3 I gettit. Sorry for all this! x__x