Comments | tseek_unique: "Between the Buried and Me"

tseek_unique

"Between the Buried and Me"

Feb 25, 2005 02:12

Title: Between the Buried and Me ( Read more... )

Comments 19

jaekayelle March 1 2005, 17:21:11 UTC

Okay. Did that Jack/Will smutfest actually happen or didn't it? Sneaky, irritating writer keeping her readers on edge like that. *winks* I gotta hand it to Will. He must have the patience of a saint to put up with Jonah's unpredictability. So does James with his handful named Jack. You'd almost think the Sparrow boys were twins or something... *g*

Sorry I'm so late with this fb. Thought I had commented the first time I read this. My bad.

tseek_unique March 2 2005, 02:03:04 UTC

Thanks very much for your feedback! *hugs* I think clues may surface soon, which I hope will hold your interest. Off from work a couple of days with nothing to do but write smut develop the plot further. Ho-hum! *wink*

jaekayelle March 2 2005, 05:15:58 UTC

That you're going to "write smut develop the plot further" is good news indeed. Clues are good. No worries about holding my interest. :)

A favour por favor? Would you go here and cast a critical eye over a short piece I wrote? I decided not to just fling the fic out into the wilds without having others look it over first. Merci.

tseek_unique March 5 2005, 02:14:35 UTC

And I'm sorry I'm late on the reply! I got wrapped up reading "Roles" and completely forgot to thank you for your kind feedback. All of my pirates have gone completely out of control and now I have to round them up and redirect them. Naughty boys!

meletor_et_al March 9 2005, 06:29:21 UTC

DAMN!

I missed this. Please eat me.
.::swats at flist::.

meletor_et_al March 9 2005, 06:41:08 UTC

Owing you a superduperfeedback:

As for petulant!Jonah with his breakfast ( “What a fine state of affairs! It is nearly eleven o ‘clock and those two are late for a breakfast I cannot provide.” )-- Too adorable, and so Jonah (well it would be; you created him.)

As for the Jack/James -- .::falls on top of you::. yay. <3.

As for Jack's remarks on Anubis -- he would say that, wouldn't he? *love*

As for the Will/Jack -- You. are. too. Sneaky. But either way, Jamie coming in and believing that Jack was different now and all his? Heartbreaking.

And Nailah and Ana are too lovely the two of them.

Trotting off for the next part!
(more smut? *hope*)

tseek_unique March 10 2005, 00:58:09 UTC

Thank you, thank you for your lovely feedback. *Prostrates self before you* Thank you for your comments on Nailah and Ana-- I hoped readers would find them interesting: a shy little girl who wants to be a pirate just like Ana. *g* Sounds just like us! James' heart ia about to take a beating, I fear.