Desert Bride: Calling in the bet

[tsaiko]

Class got out early, so I was able to get this finished. It's completely un-betaed, which I've noticed is usually not a good thing. I went back through some of the unrevised parts of this story and good lord, it's a wonder people don't think English is a second language for me. Sorry about that.

Comments

[andra_sashner]

Seconded!

[tsaiko]

Oh knows! I have a hot boyfriend who likes to touch me in inappropriate places. My life is so hard. Boo hoo!

[wittyilynamed]

Jeez, does anyone other than me wish I had this problem? xD

[m_steelgrave]

If this is what comes from losing a bet, everyone should lose more often. ^_^

[tsaiko]

I agree with this. In fact, I think this should become something of a ritual between these two. Mostly because Osmond strikes me as the kind of guy who won't give up even when he really should.

He's going to lose many, many games of senet. XD

[m_steelgrave]

If that's the case, EVERYONE WINS. \o/

[avalon13]

Again, he was struck by how easily Amenan was willing to give in. It was unfair. It didn't make sense. Why? Why?
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WHY DOES THE WORLD SPIN? WHY DOES THE PRISONER WATCH THE FLIGHT OF BIRDS? THERE ARE A MULTITIUDE OF QUESTIONS WE MAY NEVER FIND ANSWERS FOR, AND AN ETERNITY COULD BE SPENT LOOKING FOR THEM.

BUT NOT FOR THIS QUESTION.

THIS ONE IS SIMPLE.

It is because Ozmond is his bitch.

Buwahahahahaahhaahahah.

[tsaiko]

^_^ Yes, yes he is.

[kiyoshi_chan]

Poor sweetie. :(

[mechante_fille]

Yes, poor Osmond. *pets* But I agree, watching him suffer is quite delightful. ^___________^

I hope this prompts more writing of this story. I am most intrigued. ^_^

[tsaiko]

It may do that indeed. At the very least, it will encourage me to connect the scenes I already have started.