Desert Bride: Calling in the bet

[tsaiko]

Class got out early, so I was able to get this finished. It's completely un-betaed, which I've noticed is usually not a good thing. I went back through some of the unrevised parts of this story and good lord, it's a wonder people don't think English is a second language for me. Sorry about that.

Comments

[skylark97]

Poor guy. There's something sadistically fun about watching them struggle to not give in to what you know they totally want to (and probably eventually will) give in to.

*HUGE puppy eyes* There will be more, right? *_____* Because, you know, preeeeeety. Plus, I totally want to see how Amenan convinces Osmund to succomb and put his wants and desires ahead of what his culture demands he should want and desire. It was fun to see too, how Amenan was confusing him on the whole dominate/be dominated aspect. *snickers* Silly Os.