Comments | tsaiko: AU Digimon, part 3b

tsaiko

AU Digimon, part 3b

Dec 17, 2003 15:17

Holy cow, this is getting written fast. I have the third part mostly done and then all I have to do is add the scene where Yolei beats the crap out of Davis to the first part. Then the third part will be done. And since I have a good chunk of the fourth and fifth part already hand written, I expect those to get polished rather quickly. Wow. I don't ( Read more... )

au, fanfic, singing of dragons, blame game, yaoi, digimon

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Note to self: tsaiko December 17 2003, 16:35:07 UTC

miome points out that after not having heard Ken's voice for six years Davis should have some sort of reaction. A thought that Ken sounds older, deeper, funny through the machine, etc., something, anything. Add it in later.

This has been you're own personal reminder, Tsaiko. Add more sex too.

sugahlei December 17 2003, 17:15:17 UTC

just got done reading the stuff in Boys_inc...and now i want more! gaaah! stop posting bits and pieces and give us something solid!

....

ew, daisuke, you lil pervert.

*grin* anyhooo--i liked the overall breathlessness dai has, especially since he *is* crazy and not quite that bad, ...and i wanna see Ken's reaction to Dai!

...and yes, more sex, please.

tsaiko December 17 2003, 17:25:55 UTC

I am giving you solid stuff! I'm just writing here in bits and then posting it in larger chunks on Boys_inc. And trust me, chapters 4 and 5 look to be much longer. I have no idea about 6.

And the real question is, is Davis insane? REALLY?

And yes, Davis is a little pervert. There's this one shower scene that got added in to part five that had me going "This was not in the original idea... o_O"

I'm glad you like it!

silverthunder December 18 2003, 12:11:26 UTC

*_* I love you...

I really would like to know how the encounter with Yolei went... The hints you gave suggest that it was not that pleasant. But I'm curious, actually. And the bits at the end - awww, poor Davis. I hope they can get together soon... *bites lip*

The only thing I didn't like was how short it was. ;) But I suppose that's all right, because there will be more eventually. Right?

tsaiko December 18 2003, 12:36:08 UTC

Yeah, this was a short scene. There's another scene that happens right after this where you find out exactly how it went with Yolei. Bundle the three scenes together, and you have part three.

I write in pieces like this. Annoying, but it works. ^_^

And of course there's more.