Fic: "Back to Earth" (7/8)

Feb 13, 2009 17:06

Title: Back to Earth
Pairings: Helo/Gaeta, Helo/Sharon. Can be read with the occasional Gaeta/Baltar undertones.
Genre: It's a gen story overall but with some slash and het b-plot. So it's kind of a gen hybrid.
Rating: PG-13 for some sex, PTSD, bad language in the face of danger and, ya know, people killing robots.
Characters: Gaeta, Helo and ( Read more... )

genre: action/mission, helo, back to earth, gaeta/helo, athena, helo/sharon, bsg fic, dee, hot dog, gaeta

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elzed February 13 2009, 18:55:18 UTC
Fab. I especially liked how you made Sam interact with the Cylon web - it felt absolutely right, like I'd imagine it to be.

A very kickass chapter!

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trovia February 13 2009, 20:02:42 UTC
Thanks! You wouldn't believe how long it took me to get Sam's scenes to work. :)

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safenthecity February 13 2009, 19:55:41 UTC
I was afraid this had died. I was very sad at that thought. :) Glad I was wrong!

I don't know whether I commented on any of the older chapters, but I like this story. You manage to get action and emotion and plotline all in at once, and it works.

Now... we can have a happy ending? :)?

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trovia February 13 2009, 20:07:42 UTC
Heh, thanks for letting me know you're reading this. And I'm very glad that you like it. :)

I always planned on finishing the fic (I don't start uploading before I'm absolutely sure I can finish a fic). But I graduated, and then I was sick. So it took a while, unfortunately. I hate it when that happens.

Now... we can have a happy ending? :)?

Let's see what I can do about that. :) I'll upload the last installment as soon as it's beta'd.

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safenthecity February 13 2009, 20:37:44 UTC
I know how that is. When I wrote in high school, I had this tendency to... not finish what I started. That's why I rarely write chapter fics, or if I do, I don't post them until they're all written in some form or other, even if all the chapters aren't beta'd yet.

Yay! Because happy endings? I am so in need of one right now. <3

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rebelliousrose February 15 2009, 07:00:38 UTC
As usual, this is brilliant. I love the part where Gaeta like "this is just occurring to you NOW?" Trust Helo to be atoning in the middle of a war.

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trovia February 15 2009, 18:07:24 UTC
Hey, I didn't know you're reading this! Cool. :)

I love Helo madly but he really needs to get his priorities sorted out sometimes. :D

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rebelliousrose February 15 2009, 20:21:18 UTC
I wanted to read all of it before I said anything; I hate works in progress because people don't FINISH them and then I hate the authors for leading me on. I love your work; assume if it's BSG and you wrote it, I've read it! (Or am going to read it, if it's been a busy week.)

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trovia February 16 2009, 23:50:49 UTC
That's a great compliment. Thanks. :)

I always finish my fic. I hate it myself when stories die and I only start uploading when I'm absolutely sure that I'll be able to finish. But I guess a lot of writers claim that without meaning it.

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falafel_musings February 15 2009, 11:21:23 UTC
Thanks for continuing this! I'd been wondering about it. This chapter was really action-packed and well-managed. I doubt I could write this kind of heavy-duty SF. I still really enjoy the B-Team Heroes aspect of this fic.

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trovia February 15 2009, 18:09:17 UTC
I'm more of an action writer in the first place. I'm always amazed about the wonderful character driven fic you and some others write so effortlessly. :)

Thanks for commenting!

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mamaboolj February 17 2009, 02:01:17 UTC
Late again. I hate how life gets in the way of my fangirl time :)

This is a really great installment. You wrote the battle scene brilliantly, and all of the B-line players had their perfect moments. Now on to read Chapter 8!

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trovia February 17 2009, 12:03:38 UTC
Thanks so much! I surprised myself by how hard it was to write that battle scene. Really glad it worked for you. :)

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