Come Fly With Me (part 3.1)

Dec 22, 2010 08:36

Summary: A little bonus fic that ties in with my Come Fly With Me fic. It's not completely necessary to read that prior to this - essentially, Sherlock and John are on holidays together - in this instance, on the Holmes family estate in Bordeaux - and there are quite a few sexytiems.
This fic also includes the OC Alec (whose appearance has been ( Read more... )

come fly with me, john, transport series, sherlock

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troublesize December 23 2010, 01:15:33 UTC
*has a fit* Please, tell me if the alt text is working, and I just can't view it properly because it's my own journal! Otherwise, I'll have to reformat!

*nervously awaits feedback*

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caffienekitty December 27 2010, 04:27:32 UTC
You need quotation marks around what you have for alt text and it should work. (I'm waiting til the story is finished to read it in one go, but I had to pop in and troubleshoot. ;-D)

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troublesize December 27 2010, 21:28:42 UTC
Okay, I've edited the quotation marks in the entry, and it still hasn't worked! *despairs* D:
I don't know what I'm doing wrong!

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caffienekitty December 27 2010, 21:51:40 UTC
I just copied and pasted your coding into a test post on my own LJ, and it worked fine, so I don't know why it's not working on yours... Let me look in to it here for a minute.

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dracutgrl December 27 2010, 01:41:46 UTC
It looks like an italics error.

THe smut was hot regardless :)

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troublesize December 27 2010, 20:27:18 UTC
Yeah, italics was part of it... I'm attempting to fix it.

Glad you enjoyed the sexxings! :D

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darthhellokitty December 27 2010, 06:01:17 UTC
Oooh, I love this! THANKS! :-) :-) :-) (Of course, now I'm gonna have the rest of the fandom after me because it's MY FAULT you haven't written just lately...)

It is definitely a PWP plus! I like getting to know so much about Alec, so he's not just a paper doll. He's such a charming character! I like that he's crushed on Mycroft too, but that his heart belongs to Sherlock (who he is so formal with, and has such a hard time being talked into calling by his first name!) - and his fantasies aren't JUST about sex, they're also about being able to talk with him, or teaching him to shoot!

His reaction to John is adorable (much like John is) - I love the part about the English being always slightly on the back foot when nudity was suggested at a party. XD And then being invited to join them for dinner...

Oh, god. He wanted to fuck his master. Desperately. Had wanted to for years. And he wanted to fuck his master’s partner. Worst and best of all - they seemed to want to fuck him.I LOVE THE THREE-SIDED TABLE. XD ( ... )

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troublesize December 27 2010, 20:50:37 UTC
OMG LOOKIT YOUR COMMENT IT'S AS LONG AS MY FIC!! XD ( ... )

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troublesize December 27 2010, 20:29:33 UTC
Thank you! I spent way longer on this than I really should have, lol. I'm glad it paid off tho!

There are further instalments of Come Fly With Me coming up, so hopefully you can enjoy those - despite the lack of Alec ;)

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ladyredcrest December 27 2010, 06:55:08 UTC
So wonderful. It was a happy moment to be reminded of this story. Now, please excuse me, I need a cold shower.

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troublesize December 27 2010, 20:32:28 UTC
Hee! Glad you enjoyed it! *allows you as many cold showers as you want*

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ladyredcrest December 28 2010, 06:03:30 UTC
I can't decide to tell you I am blaming you for my next water bill or make you promise to quit whatever job/school you have to do nothing but write FF all day.

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troublesize December 28 2010, 09:50:45 UTC
I have to admit, I somehow find the second prospect far more appealing, so I'll take that one, plzkthx XD

("No, I can't pay rent this month, remember? your_icequeen said that I should quit work in order to write FF always and forever, instead. It's a legitimate life choice!") :P

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