Come Fly With Me (part 3.1)
Summary: A little bonus fic that ties in with my Come Fly With Me fic. It's not completely necessary to read that prior to this - essentially, Sherlock and John are on holidays together - in this instance, on the Holmes family estate in Bordeaux - and there are quite a few sexytiems.
This fic also includes the OC Alec (whose appearance has been ( Read more... )
This fic also includes the OC Alec (whose appearance has been ( Read more... )
It is definitely a PWP plus! I like getting to know so much about Alec, so he's not just a paper doll. He's such a charming character! I like that he's crushed on Mycroft too, but that his heart belongs to Sherlock (who he is so formal with, and has such a hard time being talked into calling by his first name!) - and his fantasies aren't JUST about sex, they're also about being able to talk with him, or teaching him to shoot!
His reaction to John is adorable (much like John is) - I love the part about the English being always slightly on the back foot when nudity was suggested at a party. XD And then being invited to join them for dinner...
Oh, god. He wanted to fuck his master. Desperately. Had wanted to for years. And he wanted to fuck his master’s partner. Worst and best of all - they seemed to want to fuck him.
I LOVE THE THREE-SIDED TABLE. XD
And then... OH MY. What a LOVELY SEX SCENE. Or scenes. Or extended scene... I don't know WHAT to call it, but it's LOVELY. I know it can be hard to write a threesome well and not have readers being confused about who's where and who's in who, but you do SUCH A WONDERFUL JOB. :-) I love Alec's changing attitudes, going from being very submissive to Sherlock to working with John to reduce him to nothing but desire. And then being IN THE MIDDLE. SO HOT.
And then, rather than having to clean up the bed to sleep, they just GO OVER TO THE OTHER BED. Hahaha, what a nice fantasy!
And then Alec will be visiting them in London!!!
This is just amazing. I'll be reading this again and again. Thank you SO much!!!
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Ok, I'll take *some* responsibility for my lack of posts recently :P I will also blame the weather, which hopefully takes some of the pressure off both of us!
I had real issues with writing Alec without developing him. I wanted him to be sweet and nervous and shy (but not virginal), but I had a problem with Sherlock being in a position of power such that he *could* theoretically *order* Alec to come to bed with them, and I really wanted to make it clear that Alec wasn't being coerced. So I hope that came across :)
So glad the three-sided table worked for you, it was an element I was really unsure about keeping!
Haha, yeah, this fic had to be posted all in one, because there just isn't anywhere in the sex scene(s) to put an interval, it would be wrong!! I was worried about the excessive use of everyone's names while describing the action, but then I've also read fics with excessive use of "him" and "he" and had absolutely no idea who's meant to be doing what (even when it's just TWO of our boys!).
Basically, it really pleases me that all the effort I put into this has paid off, and especially that you've enjoyed it!! More Come Fly With Me soon to come :D
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