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muddy slopes

Mar 24, 2009 20:32

Title: Muddy Slopes
Pairing: Ohkura x Yoko
Rating: PG
Word Count: 700+
Notes: For girlearthless. Prompt: my name written next to yours in your pretty handwriting. Written mostly in class, un-betaed.
Summary: Ohkura and Yoko walk in the rain.

( They are two men drenched, two young men who stand a little too close to each other and bump into each other’s shoulders as they walk down an empty path. )

p: ohkura x yoko, c: ohkura, g: kanjani8, c: yoko, t: drabbles

Comments 69

girlearthless March 25 2009, 00:35:43 UTC

MINE.

ayumwu March 25 2009, 00:52:13 UTC

POKES.

girlearthless March 25 2009, 01:06:51 UTC

YOU <3

ayumwu March 25 2009, 03:51:48 UTC

OH me. :D Request more, Y/Y? :D

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binmusic March 25 2009, 00:44:06 UTC

Psh, this just shows that you should write more Kanjani8 fic. Like Ryo/Baru?

I already told you I like the way you wrote Yoko :] And for someone who isn't really in Eito fandom, you write them well enough Triv!

Dorky pot ♥

trivialaffair March 26 2009, 04:40:06 UTC

so yeah, how's your ryo/baru coming? XDDD

aww thank you. it was good practice and i had fun, so yay.

dorky kettle :D

ky_rin March 25 2009, 00:45:40 UTC

You should totally join.

trivialaffair March 26 2009, 04:41:20 UTC

exchange, therefore i think not XP nice try though.

silentchord March 25 2009, 00:47:48 UTC

OHKURA PATTED YOKO'S TUMMY 8DDDD

Seriously though, this was adorable. I love sappy, cute Yoko ♥

trivialaffair March 26 2009, 04:41:59 UTC

:D I like Yoko's tummy. Kind of a lot.

Thank you, I'm happy you think so XDDDDD

ayumwu March 25 2009, 00:54:08 UTC

You should join EVERY SINGLE FIC EXCHANGE THERE IS. You would totally not fail.

Though, what I originally wanted to say was, WHEN DID YOU TAKE PROMPTS AND I DIDN'T KNOW ABOUT IT?! D: "Triv, have you been writing and skiving off homework again?"

I love you. Never, ever, ever stop writing Yoko as a sap. And Kura slathered in mud is kind of sexy. :D

trivialaffair March 26 2009, 04:44:10 UTC

THE KEY WORD IN THERE IS EXCHANGE, SO I THINK NOT XP

Oh um, girlearthless told me to join. I explained why I didn't want to, then told her to prompt me so that I write K8 anyway. Then that happened XD how did you know? DDD:

I love you too hahah. XD

ayumwu March 27 2009, 02:06:37 UTC

ALSKFDJ WRYYYYYY. D8

Lol hahahahhaha. You're such a pushover. XD XP why else would you randomly post fics??? XD

:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

trivialaffair March 29 2009, 02:51:29 UTC

D: shush you DDD: