He really didn't see it coming, chapter 2

[trito_chan]

I had chapter 2 written together with chapter 1, but I did`t want to post it until I finished chapter 3. And then something happened to my internet connection that prevents me from accesing the web, which is really annoying but I can´t do anything about it. The people at the IP have to get off their asses and go fix it. Soon I hope...

Title: He

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[snowzapped]

Gah! *wipes nosebleed*

Getting hotter and hotter... ^__^

More!!! XD

[trito_chan]

LOL Well you know what is up next so...:D :D Get ready for some more beta-ing! LOL And hopefully nosebleed wiping! :D

[snowzapped]

No problem! ^__^

As long as there's smut... I live to beta! LOL

[trito_chan]

Ah...smut...well my friend said my smut was like in those romance novels. :( Or soap operas :(

Is it? O_o

I want it to be NICE smut not smutty smut!

[myojo_s_me]

Wha~~~
Good one^^
*waiting for more*

[trito_chan]

Chapter 3 will be up when my beta re-reads it and makes alterations, if necessary. :) Thank you very much for reading!

[femmephantom]

HOTT!!

Excellent work, Kris! I can't wait to see what else you have in store for them.

[trito_chan]

Thank you FP! :) More is on the way, I'm stuck at chapter 4 with Ishida undressing Nemu and I just can't find the time and/or inspiration to write the rest. :)

[femmephantom]

Ugh! I know how you feel. Smut is waaaaay more fun to read than it is to write.

Best fo luck.

[trito_chan]

LOL Tell me about it! Smut is 10 times more harder to write then to read! :D :D

Like I once told snow, writing the first two chapters which are not smut took me less time then to write half of a smutty chapter...I just had to read and re-write and re-read and re-write over and over again... LOL

[cal_reflector]

there would be quite a lot for her to touch

You wouldn't know just by looking at him. One really can't judge by appearances.

[trito_chan]

LOL!
True, true! XD