Brigit's Flame Week 4: Tears of the Gods

[triplescorpio]

Note on the Prompt: When I read the phrase "tears of the gods" I immediately thought of rain. This entry, then, includes rain, physically, figuratively, and symbolically.

Comments

[musicrocks987]

Aww, good job!
I really liked the characters of Annie and Robert!
Overall it is very good!

Best of Luck!

OoO~Stuck in the Stars~OoO

[triplescorpio]

Thank you very much. I'm so glad you liked it!

[lacruciverbiste]

good stuff! just watch out for tense-switching (fifth paragraph). since the piece is in present tense, be careful not to slip into the "easy" way of narrating in the past.

good luck this week!
~La Cruciverbiste :)

[triplescorpio]

Thanks so much! I appreciate your comments and critique.

[attentionhoard]

I really loved this piece. Nice work!

It reminds me a lot of McEwan's On Chesil Beach. Ever read it?

[triplescorpio]

No, I haven't, but I'm planning to now! And thank you for the compliment. It pleases me you liked it.

[intermezzo_poet]

This was... amazing

[triplescorpio]

Oh, thank you! Your comments mean a lot to me. I'm really glad you liked the story and the character.

[wickedmommy]

This is a great piece! I love the simple imagery it. It kind of has that lulling feeling that rain has. YOu are moving along gently through it despite the rather sad tone. The writing totally reminds me of rain. Great job and good luck!

[triplescorpio]

Thank you so much. And good luck to you too.