Fang Bang Bar: Yours To Keep

[trinkdufreak]

Title: Fang Bang Bar: Yours To Keep
Chapter Two
Rating: NC-17 over all
Summary: Minho never thought he'd fall in love. Especially with a human. That was the rule; don't fall in love with humans because they die and you're left with nothing. But then Lee Jink came along. Everything about Jinki is beautiful. What's a vampire to do? Pray that the

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[keygasmic]

Eeeeeep! I loved this chapter! ♡

[trinkdufreak]

thank you lovely ^^;

[kpopforlife]

A very smooth and hard cock poking at his entrance had his eyes shooting open. The fire was all around him, full of blazing heat and he begged Minho to stop. He couldn't take anymore, it was too much.
“No Minho please!” he felt tears prick his eyes as the vampire bucked his hips and buried himself balls deep in to his lover. “T-too much! I can't!”
With every deep and powerful thrust Jinki moaned for Minho to stop, his nerves were on overload. He wasn't sure if he was going to come again or if his mind was going to black out. Minho, being the dead man with forever stamina that he was, lasted a very long time.
Eventually Jinki stopped moaning loudly, stopped panting for the vampire to stop. He laid there, limp and lifeless as small gasps left his slack mouth and Minho continued to fuck him beyond reparation.

That's actually the textbook definition of rape and I'm really, truly disturbed that this is somehow supposed to be viewed as sexual and appealing. A warning would be nice. Not glorifying a heinous, vulgar act would be nicer.

[trinkdufreak]

So I re-read this scene over and over again. And at first I thought 'I don't see where they're coming from. I didn't write this scene as rape." but just because I didn't write it as rape doesn't make it not so right

[kpopforlife]

I don't know why you think I like hate you or whatever. I don't. I just don't enjoy reading rape scenes, especially in a context where it is distorted and meant to be something it isn't aka nice, loving, beautiful, desired ect. Glorified rape is far too common of a problem in fanfiction (not just yours, I see this literally all the time) and it only serves to desensitize people to the reality of rape, rape culture and victim blaming.