Fang Bang Bar: Yours To Keep

[trinkdufreak]

Title: Fang Bang Bar: Yours To Keep
Chapter Two
Rating: NC-17 over all
Summary: Minho never thought he'd fall in love. Especially with a human. That was the rule; don't fall in love with humans because they die and you're left with nothing. But then Lee Jink came along. Everything about Jinki is beautiful. What's a vampire to do? Pray that the

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[trinkdufreak]

So I re-read this scene over and over again. And at first I thought 'I don't see where they're coming from. I didn't write this scene as rape." but just because I didn't write it as rape doesn't make it not so right?

But as I continued reading over it and asking some friends for feedback, I can see where I've fallen short. Jinki said no, Minho kept going even as Jinki continued to protest. I literally smacked myself in the head, no means no and in this situation Minho should have stopped. I failed to write about how Jinki was overly sensitive yet enjoying himself. (I mean in my mind it was all laid out and Minho could feel Jinki's emotions so everything was good but I suck yeah) I've made a mistake. I apologize. my intentions were never to write a textbook rape scene or to disturb you. I never thought a warning was needed. I never ever wanted to glorify this type of act, I do not condone it in any way. But obviously I am at fault because you were offended. And for that I apologize.

You may take this however you like, but I'm sincerely apologizing. I hope in the future we can get along.
If you would like to PM to discuss this further or just to tell me off (I get it I messed up) please feel free to do so.

In the end I'd like to thank you for your input. Thank you.

[kpopforlife]

I don't know why you think I like hate you or whatever. I don't. I just don't enjoy reading rape scenes, especially in a context where it is distorted and meant to be something it isn't aka nice, loving, beautiful, desired ect. Glorified rape is far too common of a problem in fanfiction (not just yours, I see this literally all the time) and it only serves to desensitize people to the reality of rape, rape culture and victim blaming.