Fic: Revelations

[trinityofone]

OMG PEOPLE, I WOKE UP AT FOUR A.M. AND WROTE 3,400 WORDS OF PRIEST PORN! GOD DAMN YOU ALL TO HELL! (And, er, save me a seat?)

Title: Revelations
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Categories: AU, PWP, sacrilege
Length: ~3400 words
Summary: AU. John is a priest, Rodney is sin, and I am so going to hell

Comments

[viggorlijah]

So uh. This is putting me in mind of those SHAMEFULLY HOT vatican priest calendars that were going around and the entire emotional punch of sex and Rodney being just - and Sheppard not knowing anything and then plunging and whoo, yeah.

[violin_road]

So, okay. It may in fact go without saying that dfsljldfgklj439lfdsjklgs, and also that sfdl;340;egbg594;;sdljzdf/hrdlykjtfukfyxcvpo, and quite possibly that 3209tqpokpg,jehiflas;lkfh;if;;p9e;fdlkhjd;h9d'goijkr;ho8u09j00pjpodskg.

But you know, that aside.

Imma be honest, I'm not a fan of rimming? Like, I keep getting distracted from it being hot by the fact that, well, it's really gross. To me. But then you're all he doesn’t know the word for this, for whatever Rodney is doing; wouldn’t be able to say it if he did. and I sort of fall back into sdlkjlsdhgsfhjl98gs territory because oh jesus god that's hot. Er, no pun intended.

And then basically there was a lot more lksdlksdjl;isfgesfhing about everything, and also like, normally I get all "omg come on they've admitted they like each other Like That for about four seconds; they should not be having The Buttsex already," but this made perfect sense that John would want to, you know, do it all, because why not, and also the part where dsfl;khg;dslfhlk

[lonespark]

Whereas I like rimming a lot and love that it shows up in a lot of SGA fics. With any sex act it can be tricky to figure out if the characters would be ok with it.

[floridapeaches]

Oh Jori, Jori, Jori. Thank you for saying all the things that I wanted to, and was too dfvasofhoqnfaernfoq45vnasenhro to figure out how. ;)

[violin_road]

I will dfkjhlkfsbjleikbj9ldfkfj in your name any time ♥

[dar_jeeling]

Omfg. Yes, this is scorching hot, but also so much more than I expected.
The little glimpses into John's mind just blew me away. The angst, the guilt, the inner turmoil! It's all there.

(An unplanned sin is still that: a sin.)
The beauty of it is, he can still hear himself saying, is that man is free to choose.
“I’m--” Good, he starts to say. “--Fine. That sentence killed me.

“That was a ‘Bless you, my son,’ kind of thing, right?”
Ahahahaha. Oh, Rodney.

[kudra2324]

this is gorgeous.

[yin_again]

“You’re remarkably cranky for someone who’s just received his first blow job,”

Hee!

Also, I'm a Buddhist with a preist kink. There's got to be a shiny and special Hell for that.

I loved this to itty bitty pieces. And the manips? *faints*

[lonespark]

Is it the bald/fuzzy heads? Or the way they're wrapped up like shiny presents? Or did you mean you were a Buddhist with a Catholic priest kink.

[yin_again]

Bwahahaha! Buddhist with a Catholic oriest kink. Buddhist monks don't really do it for me, though the shiny robes look comfy.