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Fic :: Supernatural :: This is What the Wolves Were Doing

Oct 29, 2010 00:19

This is What the Wolves Were Doing
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: PG
Summary: In the missing year, Sam has a visit from someone he used to know.

( You are staring at yourself. )

pov: second, genre: gen, rating: pg, wc: under 1000, character: sam winchester, genre: timetravel, fandom: supernatural, cat: fic

Comments 26

elizardbits October 29 2010, 21:34:59 UTC

TREE THIS IS SO CREEPY OMG. So creepy and awesome.

amnoturmonkey October 29 2010, 23:11:00 UTC

I WANNA HAVE THIS FICLET'S BABIES 0.0

I kid you not, this is just...

“You?” Expel air so it sounds like laughter. “You’ll be just fine.”

The second person, I-I... it's simply wonderful and horrible at the same time. But beautifully horrible. I don't have coherent and smart comments but <3

NFFF, I know it's wrong to love massively-screwed-up hollow Sam but I can't help it

miriad October 30 2010, 00:41:35 UTC

Oh, this is SO GOOD. I love the way you portray Sam as so disconnected and broken. The sparseness of the story just reinforces that. The comparison between then!Sam and now!Sam is really fantastic as well and just highlights how different Sam really is.

Fantastic read- thanks so much!

timian October 30 2010, 06:23:22 UTC

You! ::points:: You used second person point of view to distance us from Sam, because that's how distant he is from himself. !!!!!!

Be right back, I have to go stare at a snake swallowing its own tail.

That was fabulously cool, and what an astonishing concept you rocked the fuck out of. I am impressed. Deeply. Show at its best wishes it could be this clever. (And at its best, Show is VERY clever.)

tabaqui October 30 2010, 17:48:02 UTC

Ah, man. Beautiful, creepy, a little bit heartbreaking, a lot incredible. I love it.