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treehero

FNL Fic - Agincourt

Sep 03, 2007 23:27

Give all of us gathered here tonight the strength to remember that life is so very fragile.

Eric felt that his life was defined by touches. Slipping his fingers into Jason's slack hand, he remembered so many of them. The ones just felt - his arms around Mitch. His hand touching Joanne's shoulder. Tami's arms around his shoulders. Julie's ( Read more... )

friday night lights, agincourt, fnl fic

Comments 16

thatdudejoe September 4 2007, 04:27:30 UTC

This was great. Going inside Coach's head is always fun.

Glad I could help with that last minute Matt-fact. hehehe. And that was painful to read too because it's so damn true. Tim's too. Coach should just buy a bigger house and adopt everyone!! Me included. hahaha.

treehero September 4 2007, 14:15:13 UTC

I like that adoption idea. I think Tami would definitely have to be part of the mix, 'though, because without her Eric would go off the deep end. Actually, I'm thinking a Panthers sleepover at the Taylor house? Now *that* would be interesting.

requitedhope September 4 2007, 05:01:10 UTC

Very interesting. Kyle does a really good job of keeping a lot of Coach Taylor's personal feelings hidden, while displaying what needs to be seen. Coach Taylor defitantly experienced a lot in the first season, and the drama in his life is going to continue. You'll have to write a second one then!

I defitanly enjoyed this! Great job!

treehero September 4 2007, 14:16:54 UTC

Yeah, I was thinking back to when I was watching Season 1 and growing increasingly concerned that Eric was going to have a breakdown. I mean, my God! And he just keeps rubbing at his face and finger-combing his hair. Those two gestures aren't enough to relieve the stresses he'd been under.

1407graymalkin September 4 2007, 10:39:35 UTC

I love how you've captured Coach's entire season worth of thoughts in one tiny fic. Very succinct, not a word too many or too few.

treehero September 4 2007, 14:17:22 UTC

Thanks gray! (keeping it short!)

1407graymalkin September 4 2007, 14:19:33 UTC

<3(I tend to go as Malkin if you're going for short)

treehero September 4 2007, 14:27:41 UTC

Got it, Malkin.

rachel_wilder September 4 2007, 11:48:09 UTC

I enjoy your writing so much...it's just smooth to read. Since I love Coach, of course it was a pure pleasure to experience this story. Thanks so much for writing and sharing it.

treehero September 4 2007, 14:18:31 UTC

Ahhh, just call me the smooth version of peanut butter. :) Thanks for the feedback, especially from a member of the FNL fic pantheon. I believe I have some reading catch-up to do for a bunch of you guys and so will be commenting shortly.

mikimousey September 4 2007, 21:34:22 UTC

That was a really good read. I really like the Jason and Matt parts and the Buddy is a fool part made me laugh.