Fic: Haunted

[shaman_whore]

Title: Haunted
Words: 1039
Spoilers: None, really
Disclaimer: *le sigh* no...
Notes: Right, this is set in my season four but you don't need to have read that to follow this, it's just an extension of one of the ideas I had for it. It could also be better. I've had to write it quickly over two very busy nights because I wanted to get something done for

Comments

[alesh101]

Oh gosh darn you! You made me tear up in the middle of work!

This was beautiful. I believe firmly that Much and Little John would have taken Allan's death the hardest. LJ would bottle it all up and put it away somewhere deep, Much would have been terribly troubled, like this. But he got closure, and that makes me happy.

Excellent!

[shaman_whore]

Haha I'm sorry! That'll teach you to be reading when you should be working :P
Oh they totally would, they knew him the best after all, other than Robin I suppose, (but he's a jackass anyway). And yeah, I had to give poor Much some closure or it'd be eating him up forever.
Thank you for commenting, glad you like!

[railise]

*sniffle*

That's so lovely, so bittersweet.

(One beta note-- toward the end, you're missing a word-- “No, Allan.” Much replied _____ly. “We should’ve believed you...." But the gist is gotten, so no worries!)

[shaman_whore]

(gah I know, I noticed when I read alesh101's comment on my phone earlier, forgot I hadn't put anything in there. Will go now.)

Thank you! Glad you liked :)

[rochvelleth]

Awwwwwww, this is so sad! *is all teary* Lovingly written and beautiful and so so sad. I'm just going to go away and sob for a bit now... *sniff*

I really love to think that Allan is getting in with the angels too ;) So like him!

And I love this bit:

“No, I’m not at rest because you aren’t at rest mate! So I can’t get any peace either!”

You've got Allan's voice so right!

[shaman_whore]

*offers one of her pile of tissues (am ill)*
haha thanks, he so would be in with the angels, they're like nuns after all! I'm happy I can get Allan so right.

Thank you for the comment! xxx

[robinfanatic]

*sniff*
he realised that this was it. This was the last time he’d see Allan. There was so much to say, and yet…. There was nothing more to be said.

This is so sad and so very lovely. Thanks for sharing.

[shaman_whore]

thank you!

[ironmaidenlove]

Very wonderful fic.

"and there’s all these things I should say and now you’re here and we’re talking and suddenly I can’t seem to say any of them!”

Love that line there.

[shaman_whore]

Thank you :) I thought that was quite a Much-y line