Life on Mars fic: Same Old Scene

[travels_in_time]

Title: Same Old Scene
Rating: PG/Green Cortina
Spoilers: All of Life on Mars
Word Count: 3020
Notes: Thanks for bakaknight and mikes_grrl for checking over this for me! Any remaining faults are entirely my own. Britpicks and concrit welcome.
Summary: "What is it with you and drugs and handcuffs, Tyler?"Additional note: This was written from a prompt from the LoM

Comments

[talkingtothesky]

I really like this. :) Your Gene voice is excellent.

[travels_in_time]

Thank you! I like Gene, he's a lot of fun to write. *g*

[draycevixen]

Very nice set up here and I really liked the interaction between the two, Gene's "temptation" and his feeling about waiting for Sam to start something when in his right mind.

It just seems so in character for Gene too to wonder if Sam'll ever be in his right mind.

Thanks. :D

[travels_in_time]

It just seems so in character for Gene too to wonder if Sam'll ever be in his right mind.

But also in character for Gene to not check too closely--if Sam's upright and reporting in for work, he'll ignore suspicious behavior. :D

Thanks, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[dorsetgirl]

Ooh, lovely. Well done to Gene for resisting while Sam wasn't in his right mind, and I really like the way you showed his hopes towards the end. Of course, I do think what goes on next might need a little investigation, if you were thinking about continuing this...

[travels_in_time]

Mmmm, very nice icon!

I can't do anything explicit, as you can see from what I did to this lovely prompt, which was made for pr0n. Literally. But I'd love it if someone got the urge to follow on from it! Tag-team LoM-fic, does it exist? *g*

[severinne]

This is a really great story, I love how you kept the scene in the warehouse so taut and tense by Gene's insistence that he's not going to take advantage of Sam while he's drugged out of his mind (he's a stronger person than I'll ever be, lol). Sam's so-subtle-Gene-almost-missed-it pass at the end with the handcuff keys is also really well done, and more than a little promising if you felt like carrying on... *ubsubtle poke*

Thanks for bring some much-needed Sam/Gene into my day! :D

[travels_in_time]

(he's a stronger person than I'll ever be, lol)

Ha! Than most of us, I'd bet! *g*

Thank you, I really appreciate your comments! Sadly, I can't carry on. *sigh* I don't belong in fandom, really; I can't write above PG. It's a handicap. But as I mentioned above, it'd be awesome if someone got a bunny and took it further...*furtively pokes back*

Always happy to bring the Sam/Gene...even if not bringing them very far. :D

[saintvic]

Really enjoyed this. Like the set up and how you developed it. Gene's voice was great and I love the fact that he won't take advantage of Sam in this situation. And the ending, with all that promise of what might happen next, is great. Thank you.

[travels_in_time]

Aw, thank you! I'm glad you liked it! *beams*

(HEE at your icon! I just saw that scene a few days ago and missed the next five minutes of dialogue for squeeing!)