[fic] Of Gits, Speaking To Walls and Finally Getting Somewhere

May 02, 2009 18:34

Disclaimer: I don't own Hetalia, and never will.

Rating: NC-17

Summary: Pretty much PWP. Written for the kink! meme. In which Arthur is angry, Alfred oblivious and things still somehow get sorted out?

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smut, nc-17, one-shot, fic, hetalia

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Comments 27

yuffsters May 3 2009, 03:22:45 UTC
You know;

usually, it's all you can ask for to get cuteness.

But no. You deliver with not only cuteness, but HAWTZOMG.

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transient_words May 3 2009, 13:09:24 UTC
Thank you!

I'm glad I made cute and hot (something I usually tend to fail epically at). So yes, thank you! I really do appreciate it.

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bbronco2008 May 3 2009, 03:55:03 UTC
... Beautiful.

Man, that was so -
Everything was just -
Whoa...

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transient_words May 3 2009, 13:10:37 UTC
Thank you!

I'm glad you thought this was beautiful and ... I'm flattered that I seem to have made you incoherent?

Really, thank you!

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bbronco2008 May 3 2009, 13:19:28 UTC
Your welcome!

It was very very beautiful, both in the craft of the writing and the whole idea and essence of it. And I don't become incoherent often, ha, so thankfully I've been able to come back to the understandable world XD

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transient_words May 3 2009, 13:25:04 UTC
Thank you again!

Oh, I feel even more flattered now - it's been quite a while that I've shared fic with a community, so there was lots of angst on my part over sharing this.

And I'm incoherent very, very often.

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gingerkid88 May 3 2009, 14:46:14 UTC
...Gah. Just...Gah. Oh lord...Please don't feel like you aren't fantastic. Please. Because if this isn't fantastic, what hope do the rest of us have? Gah. This is perfectly in character and perfectly funny and sad and sweet and oh so gorgeous. And hot. Mmmm...Good lord, but I think you just gained a fangirl...XD

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transient_words May 5 2009, 19:15:29 UTC
Oh, I'm really flattered, even though I don't feel deserving of that much praise. I don't think I'm anywhere near fantastic, but it makes me glad you liked this. I did try to keep this IC, seeing how I think there's little to no excuse for having characters act OOC (unless it's really necessary for the plot). I'm glad I seem to have managed to conveyed so many emotions - I wanted it to be a bit of everything?

And yes, I'm glad it's hot. I'm still rather shy about writing smut, so each time I hear my stuff is hot it makes me feel a bit better (and tempts me to write more smut XDD).

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michikixthien May 3 2009, 14:59:54 UTC
I´ve never ever read something like this before.
seriously,amazing.

You´re writing style is awesome,I really really like it omfg♥

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transient_words May 5 2009, 19:25:03 UTC
Thank you!

The fact that you commented on my writing style and mentioned that this piece is different makes me one very, very happy girl. It's hard to be different in such a large fandom like Hetalia, and my writing style is something that keeps evolving. Sometimes I feel it's decent, at other times I think it's epic fail. Mostly I don't really know how I write, so that your comment really does mean a lot.

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transient_words May 5 2009, 19:27:56 UTC
Thank you for the comment!

I mentioned in my other comments that I'm not really confident about writing smut (I still tend to blush, giggle and be fidgety about specific details). Therefore, you liking it and deeming it hot is really very motivating!

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