[fic] Of Gits, Speaking To Walls and Finally Getting Somewhere

[transient_words]

Disclaimer: I don't own Hetalia, and never will.

Rating: NC-17

Summary: Pretty much PWP. Written for the kink! meme. In which Arthur is angry, Alfred oblivious and things still somehow get sorted out?

Comments

[kanami_yuuta]

SUCH AN AWESOME WELL DESCRIBED SEX SCENE!!!

it was kinda sad at the end... yet cute... I think you'e pretty good at describing the whole atmosphere

*so touched*

[transient_words]

Thank you!

I'd been most worried about the details in the sex scene here, and some things took me a few rewrites/extra revising. I think this is the most explicit thing I've written up to this date? Most of the time, I wrote fail! smut or tended to leave it vague at best.

Hmm, I was nearly tempted to make this sadder, but I was advised not to. Besides, I felt that something uber angsty would have been inappropriate.

[masterfranny]

this was entirely perfect, for both the characterization, the touch of realism, an inexperienced but still coming out good america, and a tsundere england.

all in all, it was love *_*

quite sad on the end and at start and even halfway through (the kind of sad that makes your heart clench), and that made it even more beautiful because it feels realistic, ;_;

really a beautiful work, so if you allow me, i'll go stalkerish on you for more :D

[transient_words]

I'm so glad you enjoyed the characterisation because I really loved exploring those two. I think inexperienced! America and tsundere! England are just too much fun not to play around with.

I don't think I could have avoided the angst, even if I'd wanted to. These two have just too much history going on and ... well, I wanted to make this realistic. Not overly fluffy. I think fluff is fine, but it shouldn't be cheesy (though I must admit, I tend to write lots of cheesy sap

[parttime_job]

I'm incoherent. Speechless, really. But.

But. ♥

Remind me why you don't love your stories again? :|

I laughed during the beginning, frowned in anticipation after it, then stared. And I spontaneously combusted with happiness.

I think you managed to mix up their names every now and then. Also, "non too gently."

Loved the detail. God, it was awesome. (I'm not really the best at, you know, judging smut and all, but I thought it was great, yes.)

The ending was... sweet. It came off as sweet for some reason. For me, that is. I think I liked it more because it came off open-ended. It's like. They didn't totally patch things up, but it looks like they'll be working on it.

Also, you are currently winning at life. Coxcomb. Really. Like. *dead* Apparently more lulzy with cockscomb, but who wants to be old fashioned?

Also, this review fails to give this justice.

[transient_words]

Oh, this review made me incoherent. So much love andIdon'tdeservethis.Ifeelsoundeserving.

It's not you who loves my stories, but it's me who ADORES yours. If you'd only realise how talented you are ♥.

I'm really glad I pulled these emotions out of you. I'd intended it to be like this.

Really? Remind me why I should NOT edit after midnight. Or during RP chats XDDDD

I'm glad you did (and yeah, don't worry. I'm not an expert at this, either XDDD).

Oh, you are right. It was meant to be sweet, and open-ended. And yes, they'll be working towards patching things up (they should!).

XDDDDDD. I am SO not winning at life. Quite the contrary in fact =_=. But let's ignore the bad things in life, ne?

Not true. This review gives more than ample justice. More than it deserves in fact

[parttime_job]

B-But you deserve all the love and praise?

Hahahaa. God, my ego feels like a winnar. >.> Though I really do love your stories, dear, and I think that they're totally awesome and worthy of keyboard smashing.

Well. Er. At least I think that this is the case? Or, oho, I should be the one who shouldn't be reading close to midnight? But, true, let us remind each other not to do this.

This calls for... sequel. *shot*

Yes, yes. Let's.

♥

[reppu]

HOT.

Though America's been around the block too, ya know. Stole Mexico's hottie Texas, had a fling with the Philippines and Puerto Rico, currently has Guam and Saipan on the side. Though when compared with England's sexual conquests, America is but a baby in the crib.

Was hot and silly, with the added spice of France to liven things up. Enjoyed this muchly!

[transient_words]

Thank you.

Hmm, you are right I was debating over this, but then I thought having him being sort of inexperienced would be hot ... but seriously, this is the best summary I've ever read regarding Amercia's conquering the vital regions of other nations. XDDDDD. Yes, he is a baby in the crib, regarding England's conquests (and England IS a repressed pervert, no matter how much he denies it).

France is always love.

[kyo_sama8283]

This is bloody brilliant!
I loved it so much!
The way you wrote it, the sex scene...it was all pure brilliance!
This definitely needs a sequel...

[transient_words]

Thank you!

I'm really flattered - and I really do mean it - that you loved this. Sex scenes are hard to write (and this one did give me some trouble), so I'm really relieved this came across well.

Sequel? I'll have to think about it. I seem to have fallen into some kind of writer's block again ;_;.

[kyo_sama8283]

Haha normally I'm kind of picky about the fanfictions I read, but I really did love this one. The way you captured the characters will briliant and this is definitely a story that I could read more than once xD

Really, it was just a friendly suggestion. I'm sure that all of the people who commented your story would be thrilled as well, but I know what it's like to have a writer's block. When I was in my creative writing class...I had them frequently.