[FIC] Distorted - Tsuna

[snowpoison]

Title: Distorted
Author: Yuuki
Pairing: Hint of Tsuna/Kyoko
Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Summary: Trapped in layers of forced lies and trauma, trying to live on is beyond difficult.
Disclaimer: I don't own this fandom.
Notes: Written for daigranon for her birthday! Sorry again for the depressing subjects. Slight character death (only a minor mention),

Comments

[eclats_de_voix]

yesss, so, like I said, very strong last line, but there isn't too much action. Just a lot of contemplation and it drags on for a bit, but some parts are gems, like the little scene in which tsuna is so exhausted he ignores hibari.

[snowpoison]

i'm glad, i was really worried about writing something so depressing for your birthday. i've said that about five times now, but i just am very sorry ;w;

aw, you don't have to plus my birthday is in october

[singultation]

i really like the last line!

i noticed a few tense and spelling mistakes, and sometimes the wording feels a little awkward to me [but maybe it's just because i'm terrible at grammar], but i liked this piece overall :)

some scenes are pretty powerful, like the double-edged blade of his vongola intuition and his h/c part with kyoko ♥

[snowpoison]

no, i don't think you're terrible at grammar. most of the tensing is a bit random really... i'm sorry about that. thank you ~

[rinhail]

Nice fic. :)