Thirteen Ribbons: Employee Training

Jul 14, 2009 18:57

(( The previous part of this can be read here and I do highly recommend it. It's short, like this one ( Read more... )

writing, 13r

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teekachu July 15 2009, 02:28:37 UTC
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

I love it! What an awesome part 2 :3 I liked seeing things from poor Yaz's point of view this time :D

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tracerj July 15 2009, 02:37:22 UTC
Yeah. I kind of feel bad for tormenting him so much, but you know, at least he has a job in this economy... *shifty-eyed*

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teekachu July 15 2009, 02:43:24 UTC
XD! Oh, fantastic point. Even if he was brain-raped by a hypnosquid. Worth it? Maaaaaybe.

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sythyry July 15 2009, 02:39:16 UTC
I am so staying off Io. Too much Mentador for me!

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tracerj July 15 2009, 02:45:48 UTC
Well, the squids are from Saturn, but it amuses them to have business interests of this sort. I don't think Yaz knew that they were among the higher-ups when he got the job.

The thing is, they're almost always harmless. It's just that they're creative, and they have zero concept of this while "rude to mess with folks' heads" thing.

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momentrabbit July 15 2009, 03:30:54 UTC
they have zero concept of this while "rude to mess with folks' heads" thing.

And once they're done helping you, neither will you, either. n.n

Lovely continuation.

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ladyperegrine July 15 2009, 04:29:59 UTC
This. :-) ♥

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tracerj July 15 2009, 04:00:48 UTC
Glad you enjoyed!

After all, that brings me one step closer to being able to fan-thing all over the stuff you've written... wait, am I thinking out loud again?

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postrodent July 15 2009, 15:52:28 UTC
Ha ha ho. ^____^ Well done, Keet, well done indeed. I hope there's more coming...

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tracerj July 15 2009, 19:07:35 UTC
Well, I can't rightly stop now,can I? *grin*

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daniskwirl July 15 2009, 16:58:30 UTC
All glory to the hypno... squid.

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