Thirteen Ribbons: Employee Training

[tracerj]

(( The previous part of this can be read here and I do highly recommend it. It's short, like this one

Comments

[cobaltie]

I don't know, I think the minidress is a perfectly acceptable uniform for his gender. But then, that defeats the purpose of the social akwardness and embarassment, doesn't it? Yaz being uncomfortable in his dress is actually kinda...endearing. Obviously Eekay thinks so too. ^_^

[tracerj]

Oh, Eekay is loving this. Then again, perhaps the cat vies it as sort of retribution for something else, and I'll cover that soon....

[bossgoji]

This... it's well-written, but I really can't get past the slang. The non-dialogue stuff is excellent but as soon as Eekay talks, I have no idea what's going on anymore. It's like Anthony Burgess is beating me about the head with a Klingon Dictionary.

I'm not intending any offense by it, but if I could get a lexicon here I'd have a much easier time figuring this out.

[tracerj]

Don't sweat it. Eekay is supposed to be on that razor's edge of inexplicable. This will be addressed directly in the next part.

You did read the first part, right?

[bossgoji]

Correct!