How's My Driving
He may be an Original Character but that doesn't mean I don't need constructive crit. Am I doing well, poorly? Does my writing bother you? Tell me so I can fix it. Please be polite. All Comments screened.

[There are a few dots on the page from Blade tapping his pen before figuring what to write. Then when he starts actually writing, his handwriting is sort of neat  and loopy]

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Hello?   Ah there we go!

Are there any stores around here?  Maybe furniture stores or such?  If not, is there any place I can get some furniture?  Things like chairs, tables ( Read more... )

 [The audio turns on and the first thing you hear is the sound of pacing and the voice of an annoyed New Feather.]

-what they hell they're playing at? This place must be miles away from the Academy or old hicks-ville.

[The leaves rustle and after the brief sound of flipping pages, the video turns on to show a wiry teenage boy with blue wings.  A ( Read more... )

CHARACTER NAME: Taroku "Blade" Toyaka
CHARACTER SERIES: Original

[OOC]
This is the permissions list for OOC (out of character), activity.
Answer the following questions with "yes" or "no", as well as additional information if desired.

Backtagging: Sure
Threadhopping: if it's not private and permission is asked.
Fourthwalling: Don't know how you can   but ( Read more... )

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