Comments | tousled_quill: Ficlet;

tousled_quill

Ficlet;

Jul 02, 2006 16:42

Title: Inescapable
Pairing: Sirius/Remus
Rating: PG
Word Count: 219
A/N: Day two at dogdaysofsummer; prompt is here.

( Inescapable )

dogdaysofsummer, sirius/remus, ficlet

Comments 14

fireskies July 2 2006, 21:11:24 UTC

oh, my. So aching, and beautiful, and true. You've captured so much of Sirius and their relationship, the falling apart that cannot be stopped. This is absolutely breathtaking. :) thank you.

tousled_quill July 3 2006, 03:41:49 UTC

No, thank you for your kind words.

melandry July 2 2006, 21:53:57 UTC

The repetition is so effective here. It really hammers it home. Wonderful.

tousled_quill July 3 2006, 03:42:07 UTC

Thanks!

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tousled_quill July 3 2006, 03:43:40 UTC

Thanks muchly. Glad to know I've achieved the desired effect :)

such_heights July 3 2006, 00:07:42 UTC

Oooh, the atmosphere. Fabulous! I love how it all runs together, seems to mirror thought patterns very nicely.

tousled_quill July 3 2006, 19:17:50 UTC

*Grin* Thanks!

javajunkie13 July 3 2006, 01:51:30 UTC

Oh. I really like this, the repetition works beautifully, and the whole thing just aches. Really lovely.