Ficlet;

[tousled_quill]

Title: Inescapable
Pairing: Sirius/Remus
Rating: PG
Word Count: 219
A/N: Day two at dogdaysofsummer; prompt is here.

Comments

[centricity]

The repetition anchors the piece, and keeps it from floating away from you. A lovely device, wonderfully employed. =)

[purple_chalk]

You keel me dead with your artful repetition. I've been experimenting with that in short stories and the like, and you do it very well and must now father my children.

[tousled_quill]

Father them? Really?

Well, I suppose I'll agree to that if you'll tell me the rules of your damned game. Wench.

[purple_chalk]

Can't, you know that!

[yue_d]

Um... I love you, k?

*__*

[amberlynne]

Oh, such atmosphere! Lovely and sad. Poor dears. *sniffe* Nicely done!