Comments | totalgleekgirl: Fic: Making Amends

totalgleekgirl

Fic: Making Amends

Oct 11, 2010 13:27

Title: Making Amends ( Read more... )

kurt, angst, smut, fic, rating: nc-17, puck

Comments 14

shamelessbrie October 11 2010, 17:57:18 UTC

That was amazing as always! I don't know what your talking about your porn is effing hot!! Ahaha it doesn't look like you had to work that hard (hehe .... Hard...) at all! I digress though. Really good job bb!!!

totalgleekgirl October 22 2010, 01:50:25 UTC

Thank you darling! I don't think I write it well, but I'm glad you think I do, that's good enough for me!

Thanks darling, and I'm so happy you liked it!

lezi October 11 2010, 19:58:32 UTC

AWWW. *draws hearts around fic* I LOVED THIS. It was sweet and deliciously apologetic, and YAY, YOU DID PORN!! :D Psh, you're not good at porn? Riiiight.

I adored this fic, and it made me want Chinese. Fiercely.

But the one part that had me had to have been:
“What did you forget?” Kurt’s voice was reedy and he cleared it slightly. / “You,” Puck admitted honestly.
It just... I just...!!!

AMAZING JOB. THANK YOU SOSO MUCH, LOVELY. ♥ ♥

totalgleekgirl October 22 2010, 01:52:51 UTC

*Huggles* I'm sorry I couldn't get it out on your actual birthday, but I always seem to go brain dead when I try to write porn. :(

I'm so happy you liked this, and yes I had to get Chinese for lunch the next day lol.

You are so welcome, and I am so happy you liked it babe!

lil_miss_choc October 11 2010, 20:15:37 UTC

This was great! I especially loved this bit:
“What did you forget?” Kurt’s voice was reedy and he cleared it slightly.

“You,” Puck admitted honestly. Kurt’s head came up in surprise and Puck felt even worse when he saw the red eyes and the puffiness of his face. “I’m so sorry Kurt.”

It was just so... perfect.

totalgleekgirl October 22 2010, 01:53:31 UTC

I'm so glad you liked that, cause those were kinda the lines that the story was based on!

Thanks so much, I'm so glad you liked it, and I really love your icon!

lil_miss_choc October 22 2010, 06:54:55 UTC

Thank you! I did steal the idea slightly from a similar one, which just had the two things next to each other with a label underneath saying "Corvids & Sai Swords", but I just loved the idea of a 'coat of arms' style icon/badge that you had to know about to understand.

ellie_19 October 11 2010, 21:50:44 UTC

As always your stories are amazing!!!!

I loved this. It was angsty but also ended with some fluff. A+ :D

I can't wait to read more of your awesome stories!

totalgleekgirl October 22 2010, 01:55:33 UTC

Thank you baby, you are always so sweet to me!

I'm so glad you liked it, and yes sometimes fluff is needed.

Thanks and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

alter_alterego October 12 2010, 03:44:58 UTC

It was Lezi's birthday, but we all get to benefit! I'm so glad you posted this for everyone to see.

Like your friends before me, I can reassure you, you can indeed write some fine, fine porn. ;) That being said, I must admit that what really got to me was Puck drawing a bath for Kurt. It's like Puck was thinking: it's a simple thing, really, but it clearly meant a lot. Also: it's hot as hell.

(And I have to say, I love you a bit for the line Unsurprisingly, the guy who threw you in the dumpster is not usually the number one choice of boyfriends. So true. This does not deter us Puckurt shippers, though, does it?)

Lovely and surprisingly sweet.

totalgleekgirl October 22 2010, 01:59:12 UTC

You are so sweet to me! I'm so glad you liked it. I have a mental block when it comes to porn apparently, but I'm so glad you guys liked it!

Well, I like to think it was Puck's form of pigtail pulling.

thank you darling, I'm so glad you liked it!