Comments | totalgleekgirl: Fic: Winner

totalgleekgirl

Fic: Winner

Jun 21, 2010 17:43

Title: Winner
Disclaimer: I don't own em,if I did it would probably have to be on another channel.
Rating: PG-ish?
Warnings: A little self-loathing
Word count: 571-short!
Spoilers: Lets just say through season one to be safe.
Summary: Kurt kinda needed that trophy too.
A/N: Done for this prompt over at the glee_angst_meme

( Coach Sylvester didn't need another trophy, but some of those girls? They really did. )

rating: pg, kurt, angst, brittany, fic, santana

Comments 18

sj_r June 21 2010, 21:57:49 UTC

Do you know how much I love you? Seriously? I adored this, darling, and it's good to see you again. It feels like forever since we last talked! Thank you so much for filling this, it was amazing!

totalgleekgirl June 22 2010, 03:24:49 UTC

I have no idea how much you love me, but I assume it's a lot since I fill several of your prompts. ;)

Yes it does seem like it's been a while, hope things are all well and good!

You are so very welcome and I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!

sj_r June 24 2010, 02:04:25 UTC

You should know by now how much I worship you ;3 You're, like, one of the most amazingly awesome people I know, and not just because you fill my prompts!

They're bearable; how are things on your end?

totalgleekgirl June 24 2010, 21:32:55 UTC

Awww you are to sweet. I do fill a lot of your prompts though. ;)

Things are...shitty, but I'm pretty sure they couldn't get much worse.

Thread 5

rofro05 June 21 2010, 22:22:52 UTC

This is too cute! It makes a lot of sense that winning would mean so much to Kurt. And I love the angst that you snuck in about Kurt being used to being a looser...

Really it was all great! As always wonderful work!

totalgleekgirl June 22 2010, 03:25:40 UTC

Mental Kurt angst I don't do as often...I usually let Puck handle that, but every once in a while I do, this seemed fitting for it.

I'm so glad you liked it hon and thanks so much for your comment!

eyesarmslove June 21 2010, 23:31:35 UTC

And everyone loves a winner right?

DIED. Just there. DEAD.

SO beautiful. My poor baby!

totalgleekgirl June 22 2010, 03:26:35 UTC

This whole damn story revolved around that one freaking line! I read that prompt, that popped into my head and I worked from there...all ass-backwards lol.

Thanks so much darling, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

baronbacon June 22 2010, 01:05:19 UTC

This fic is beautiful, as are all your stories.
at first I thought this fic might be some fluff, but then this line came at the end:
And everyone loves a winner right?
and it felt like a kick to the metaphorical nads.
Love you!!

totalgleekgirl June 22 2010, 03:28:00 UTC

No fluff, angst in a more subtle non violent kind of way...I do that from time to time. I'm sneaky like that. ;)

and it felt like a kick to the metaphorical nads,/i> might be the funniest comment I've ever gotten, I giggled insanely at that for some reason!

Thank you lovey, I'm so glad you liked it and I really appreciate your comments! Love you back!

alter_alterego June 22 2010, 02:46:39 UTC

That whole "Cheerios win nationals on Kurt's oh-so-fine" back thing was ripe for the (angst-)picking--and I'm thrilled that you did.

Yeah, this may have been short for you, but you managed to cram a lot of psychological hurt in there: that Kurt is used to feeling like a loser, that he doesn't feel like he belongs with the Cheerios, that he carries the weight of the Cheerios' dreams on him, and (my personal angsty favorite) the realization that everything he touches fall apart. Ow, ow, ow, and double ow. All painful, and all believable from what we've seen.

For some reason, this part-- Somehow in the knowledge that they would win, he felt a pang of regret too, because he knew this wasn’t his world. He was just playing in it until he was no longer useful--really got to me. Even when he's victorious Kurt can't even truly enjoy the victory.

I'm sitting here all wibbly thinking about Kurt--which means this is another job well done. :)

alter_alterego June 22 2010, 02:47:57 UTC

Real quick 'edit' alert: I think your disclaimer needs a quick edit, since as much as I'd like to believe, Kurt, Sue, and the gang are not RP. :)

totalgleekgirl June 22 2010, 03:28:25 UTC

Oh damn it...epic fail. Fixed.

totalgleekgirl June 22 2010, 03:30:54 UTC

Why thank you darling, you are always so very sweet to me!

Ah yes, my rare Kurt mental angst. I'm normally all about...maim him! Scar him...the mental...that's usually Puck. But every once in a while I go for Kurt...which isn't very nice of me cause now he's getting it from all sides. That poor boy.

Yes, the thing is, I can totally see Kurt feeling that way, and it sucks, but a lot of what he does seems like he's just...looking for someone to give a shit, ya know?

Anyhow, thanks so much love, I really appreciate your comments, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!