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totalgleekgirl

Fic: Would it be Better?

Apr 30, 2010 02:31

Title: Would it be Better?
Disclaimer: I don't own em, I if I did glee would probably have to be on a different channel.
Rating: R
Characters: Kurt, Burt, Finn, Carole, The Glee Club, Will, and Sue. Yeah, pretty much everyone!
Warnings: Ok, so long warnings, Suicide warning, subject matter, not much language I don't think, disturbing themes, ( Read more... )

carole, burt, kurt, mr. schue, glee club, angst, sue, fic, finn

Comments 55

halleylahli April 30 2010, 08:12:41 UTC

This was so so sad, but so true to live ( ... )

totalgleekgirl May 1 2010, 00:52:43 UTC

Has there? I haven't look at much of it, but I think underneath it all, Kurt's intentions are normally good. Not always, but usually.

I really appreciate your comments, it's so very sweet, and I'm really happy that you thought this was well done. Thank you, and again I'm glad you enjoyed it!

crystalbunny5 April 30 2010, 08:15:04 UTC

OMG...this was so incredibly sad. I hate to think that Kurt had no where else to turn...that he felt so lost and alone. This really made me cry. You've definately earned your angst rep.

totalgleekgirl May 1 2010, 00:54:04 UTC

Why thank you, I am an original (or perhaps I'm the founding) member of the angstkateers. ;)

I'm really glad you that liked it, and thanks so much for your comment!

pearljamz April 30 2010, 10:25:15 UTC

This is terribly sad...yet beautifully written nonetheless!

totalgleekgirl May 1 2010, 00:54:27 UTC

Thank you! I'm so happy that you enjoyed it, and thank you so much for your comment!

aspiring_prole April 30 2010, 11:01:58 UTC

This was incredibly upsetting, but I don't think you overdid the angst....it didn't feel melodramatic or forced, which would be easy to do with a topic like this. I'm definitely going to check warnings before reading in public in future though!

totalgleekgirl May 1 2010, 00:55:29 UTC

Oh thank you, I'm so glad you felt that it was realistic, and not over done! Ah yeah, checking the warnings is always a good thing to do!

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you liked it, and I really appreciate your commenting!

blottedpen23 April 30 2010, 11:49:22 UTC

You had me bawling at the end of this. It was awesome.

I loved Sue in this, acknowledging how talented and good both Kurt and Mercedes were and actually giving them a chance in Cheerios without a malice thought.

Another moment that struck me was how Burt totally forgot his own son was allergic to freakin' shrimps. I know how it feels, being allergic to crustaceans and other seafood...seeing the rest of your family enjoying a particular dish while you have to make do with sloppy vegetables.

And I loved how Artie caught on...

And Puck! He wasn't much in this but he was good too :D

I had been checking the Angst meme too many time since 'Home' aired desperately looking for Kurt-angst...and damn man, I finally found it.

totalgleekgirl May 1 2010, 00:58:35 UTC

Yes, I wanted to humanize Sue just a little, but then I had to sue it up a bit when she caught Finn in the bathroom. ;)

Yeah, I've been in that situation. I've actually been told I'm rude for not eating a salad because it had peanuts in it. Sorry, not looking to have my throat close off is all.

Artie, somehow I saw him as the most likely to notice the small little things for what they were and not just behavior modifications.

Puck didn't seem like he would work for extended doses in this fic, so I when I did use him I tried to make him react in a way that would be suiting for him. Though, as a Purt girl, it was quite tempting to add some in there. ;)

I'm so glad you found your angst in my story! I make a lot of angst, so if you're ever looking swing on by!

Thanks so much for your comment, and again, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!