The Hollow, Chapter 4

[toryavi]

Title: The Hollow
Author: Toryavi (one half of it)
Pairing: Tora/Miyavi (to be)
Rating: PG-13. (R in the future)
Warnings: Psychological disorders and institutions.
Disclaimer: The people belong to themselves, the story and plot belongs to me.
Summary: Sometimes, everyone needs a little crazy in their life.
Notes: I promise it'll get less

Comments

[orkrist]

... Woah. I just discovered this fic and read it all from the beginning, and I must to admit that I'm really speechless. This went straight to the top five of my favourite fics. The plot is great - although I've read some fics about psychological disorders earlier, this is really something special. I'm really intrigued to see where this will go from now on.

The characters (meaning the main trio Tora-Miyavi-Uruha) are well-built and lively and they are easy to picture. Gotta say that I love your Miyavi so freaking much that I have no words to describe it. He's just... incredible. I can so see him in front of my eyes, the spinning, babbling, colourful blur and in the next moment the crying and helpless form. I really liked how Uruha described him - "He’ll tell you everything and nothing, how the hell are you supposed to help someone when you know nothing about him and he knows everything about you?" - cause in some way it told a lot about Miyavi's personality. Bipolars have always been pretty interesting mental disorder patients in my

[toryavi]

I just want to say, your comment left me speechless, so thank you very much! I can tell you really enjoy my fic and reading all of this flattered me very much so. So I really don't know how else to say it other than, THANK YOU

[orkrist]

Now when you said, I think that it indeed shows in this fic that you are studying psychology, because there is that hint of... well, professionality. I hate that word but couldn't figure out any better, so it must do. I'm sure you understand what I mean.

And no problem, I'm glad that my comment is liked! I usually want to say something else to writers than just "wow I loved it!!! plz continue!!" 'cause I write, too, and I know how annoying those comments sometimes are, since they usually don't tell very much about how was the fic. So I like to write a little longer comments, 'cause for me it's always very nice when someone has said a little more than just "it's amazing! continue!" :3

Well, what else can I say but that I'm looking for the next chapter with enthousiasm!