The Hollow, Chapter 4

[toryavi]

Title: The Hollow
Author: Toryavi (one half of it)
Pairing: Tora/Miyavi (to be)
Rating: PG-13. (R in the future)
Warnings: Psychological disorders and institutions.
Disclaimer: The people belong to themselves, the story and plot belongs to me.
Summary: Sometimes, everyone needs a little crazy in their life.
Notes: I promise it'll get less

Comments

[kapike]

Wow..I loved this chapter. It was amazing and I don't even have right words to describe it. I am loving this story so much and every time I see an update I get all excited. The way you write is amazing.

[toryavi]

Wow, people responded so quickly o_o i was gone for class But thank you! ^_^ it's comments like these that motivate me to write the chapters faster.

[toryavi]

Yeah, I wanted to make it realistic and realistically, problems don't just disappear after a day, so it'll take some time. But I'm glad you liked it! I was worried I was making it too dramatic all of a sudden >>;

And Uru cares a lot about Miyavi, it's just so adorable. Actually the talk with Tora and Uru wasn't really planned. It just came up while I was writing it out and I liked how it came out so I kept it XD

[toryavi]

Don't worry, the depressing bits should lighten up soon!

[bauci]

Oh. Good chapter.
I liked what Uruha said. I hope Tora will follow through.
♥

[toryavi]

Don't worry, if Tora doesn't, Uruha just might maul Tora and then some ^^

[rukana]

OMG! Poor Miyavi~! I wanted to hug him and shake him at the same time. LOL (^_^);;;

I really liked this chapter. Especially the part at the end with Tora telling Miyavi that he'd do his best to get Miyavi out of there. Gosh, I sure hope he gets Miyavi out of there because they BOTH deserve to be happy. (^_^)

I can't wait for the next chapter~! (^_^) <333

[toryavi]

Don't worry, it'll get less depressing! And depressing Miyavi will probably make less of an appearance, so it'll be good. No more near death experiences ^_^