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ysarda March 11 2009, 12:11:50 UTC
One thing I appreciate is that even though the story is told from different characters POV it's not too introspective or overexplicative, especially when they express feelings, it remains somehow factual, therefor readers have to guess how much they know, how much they hide, what they really think. I love the rather unusual conciseness of it all, how you are economical in your writing and in the way you unfold the plot and trust your readers intelligence.

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topgeargirl2 March 12 2009, 00:04:00 UTC
Thanks

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hab318princess March 11 2009, 18:12:39 UTC
great update, the last line, brilliant

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topgeargirl2 March 11 2009, 23:50:08 UTC
Thanks

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missthingsplace March 11 2009, 19:53:10 UTC
Great chapter.

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topgeargirl2 March 11 2009, 23:39:12 UTC
Thanks

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