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cruentum February 7 2010, 17:19:57 UTC
I really enjoyed this. I seem to have developed a soft spot for children (in fiction), so that was awesome and a little heartbreaking really. Man, Scott, hugs for him, huh. Enjoyed this a lot.

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topgeargirl2 February 8 2010, 00:48:20 UTC
Thanks.

When I was writing this I thought I was going to cry because it was sentimental.

Yeah it made me want to hug Scott in my mind.

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jsks February 8 2010, 16:59:11 UTC
or maybe a little girl who would be so their wee princess.

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topgeargirl2 February 9 2010, 00:57:36 UTC
Yeah maybe

thanks

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duck_or_rabbit February 9 2010, 17:54:45 UTC
I like this. It's been mentioned upthread already, but the bit about the discounted milk is such a lovely human touch.

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topgeargirl2 February 10 2010, 02:22:25 UTC
Thanks

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kathw15 February 12 2010, 23:26:22 UTC
awwww that was soo sweet!!!!! luved it xxxx

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topgeargirl2 February 13 2010, 01:59:15 UTC
Thanks

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petou May 22 2010, 18:42:34 UTC
so lovely. I like that you write something that show that
they're just "like us" lol.. and are normal being who
go groceries shopping and look out for discounted. They might eat caviar once in a while, but they do drink milk too.
Nice touch also on Scott's POV and kids.
I guess he will be able to say that he is the father of
5 ( a kid, 3 dogs and John)

thank you

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topgeargirl2 May 23 2010, 02:35:05 UTC
Thanks

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