On Bonnie Brae (PG-13)

Aug 27, 2007 14:35

Title On Bonnie Brae
Author toolazytowork
Pairing House/Wilson
Rating PG-13
Summary There's nothing left to do but wait. If you're lucky you have someone to wait with.
Warnings Apocafic.
Word Count 3230
Notes Big thanks to recrudescence for the beta.

Activate emergency operations plan. )

house/wilson, fanfiction

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ignazwisdom August 29 2007, 06:11:50 UTC
Oh, wow. I'm a big fan of apocalypse fic, and this one was really good. Pushed all my buttons. :) You write their dialogue really well!

(I noticed a few extra spaces and missing periods throughout, so you might want to keep an eye out for those if you read through it again.)

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toolazytowork August 29 2007, 14:40:41 UTC
Thank you!
Glad I could push a few buttons without setting off any alarms.
I contemplate the end of the world often. It usually happens at work, or at the mall. Typical, I suppose.

Thanks for pointing out the punctuation issues. That's very helpful.

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thelonegunwoman August 29 2007, 15:33:30 UTC
So sad. T_T Great, but sad. Loved it.

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toolazytowork August 30 2007, 14:34:49 UTC
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

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triedunture August 29 2007, 15:50:30 UTC
Wow! Fantastic. Powerful juxtaposition, my favorite being the courtroom/Wilson's confession. And the world-ending kiss, tears in my eyes I swear. OK. This is one of those fics that's going to stick in my head all day. Good, great stuff.

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toolazytowork August 30 2007, 14:36:51 UTC
Thanks! I always love to hear when stuff worked (or didn't).
Really glad you liked it. Sorry about the crying thing, though.

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toolazytowork August 30 2007, 14:38:40 UTC
Thank you very much for reading and leaving such a lovely comment.

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topaz_eyes August 29 2007, 16:45:08 UTC
It's amazing how the big admissions are uttered only in a time of crisis. You show this very clearly and believably. I have a secret fondness for apocalypse fic too.

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toolazytowork August 30 2007, 14:47:45 UTC
Exploring the way characters might deal with a crisis situation is what's so appealing about apocalypse (or related) fic. Emotions run high, but personalities don't change.
Thank you for reading! Glad you liked it.

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